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    Samedi

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    Samedi

    Post by Samedi on Thu May 07, 2015 6:15 pm

    Name: Samedi Solomon
    Nickname: The Red Knight / Death / Pilot
    Gender: Male
    Race: Human
    Age: 24
    Birthday: 30th Moon of Daggerfall
    Sexuality: Straight
    Unique Characteristics: Always found with hood up, and some mask worn over his face. The mask he wears varies from day to day.

    Personality: He likes to destroy things. He will often lurk about, changing his mask, as if he's changing his perspective on the world. It isn't that he can't focus, he just chooses not to. He is not once to pick a fight with people, but will often turn into a fit of rage and angst should he find himself backed up against the wall. He is peaceful in ethics, but savage in his behaviors. He can easily focus on things and multitask at the same time. Which means that whilst an enemy tries to flank him, he would think through many situations and variables he could do to overcome them and beat their asses. He has a six sense, the eye of the warrior. Most people practicing in melee combat own this eye. It's not a real sense, of course, but it's a figurative sense.

    He gets prude sometimes. In his own home, he feels very secure and at ease. It's the only place where he might lower his guard for a second or two. Whenever he walks into an alley and he hears footsteps behind him he would think hard and predict what would happen in two seconds, including every variable for himself and the stranger walking into the alley. Which would make him paranoid. The reason why he's paranoid can be traced to the reason why his guard is always up which is caused by the fact that he lowered it once and it caused death. He mostly does the most humane thing to do when he requires to do so. If he finds someone on the verge of death and knows that there's no way of him surviving he would end their life painlessly. He is not one to keep people waiting, but he is also one to get distracted easily.

    Likes:
    - Tacos
    - Plushies
    - Destruction

    Dislikes:
    - Burritos
    - Small animals
    - Small people

    Motivations:
    - Causing mayhem
    - Making Tacos
    - Finding somewhere to belong

    Fears/Disgusts:
    - Thunder
    - Spiders
    - Pictures of old people in bathing suits

    Eyes: Blue
    Hair: Black
    Height: 5'11"
    Weight: 145 lbs
    Complexion: Fair


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    Alignment: Neutral
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    Re: Samedi

    Post by Akira on Sat May 30, 2015 6:01 pm

    This is a great start! I would just like to ask you to do some slight modifications for me, please.

    - Your birthday should be simply a month and a day.
    - Could you possibly elaborate on the mask more? Tell me what the mask looks like. Maybe, tell me if he wears different types of masks. Things like that.
    - Personality should be at minimum 300 words. So if you could please expand upon that, that would be great.
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    Re: Samedi

    Post by Kaseki on Sat May 30, 2015 6:11 pm

    @Akira wrote:This is a great start! I would just like to ask you to do some slight modifications for me, please.

    - Your birthday should be simply a month and a day.
    - Could you possibly elaborate on the mask more? Tell me what the mask looks like. Maybe, tell me if he wears different types of masks. Things like that.
    - Personality should be at minimum 300 words. So if you could please expand upon that, that would be great.

    The only thing is the birthday. While you are not wrong, you are not right.

    As this forum is multiverse, time is different in different worlds. This means months may go by different names, or even by different standards of time. This is why we ask for the month to be spelled out, so we know what form of time the user uses.

    BUMP

    Let the test continue~

    and when you feel like this app is good and 100% perfect, slap on that approval.


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    Re: Samedi

    Post by Akira on Sat May 30, 2015 7:08 pm

    Alright. It's looking better! There are still a few more things I would like you to fix though, please.

    - Your personality is only 286/300 words. Could you add in that last little bit?
    - Your weight is 45 pounds whereas your height is 5'11". I find that to be a little slim for someone of that height. Could you bump that weight up some, please? (Say maybe 130 pound or more. Just helping out. ^^)
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    Re: Samedi

    Post by Nameless on Sat May 30, 2015 7:13 pm

    @Akira wrote:Alright. It's looking better! There are still a few more things I would like you to fix though, please.

    - Your personality is only 286/300 words. Could you add in that last little bit?
    -  Your weight is 45 pounds whereas your height is 5'11". I find that to be a little slim for someone of that height. Could you bump that weight up some, please? (Say maybe 130 pound or more. Just helping out. ^^)

    Nice catch.

    Bump


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    Momma Aki~

    Lineage : Weather Master
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    Class : B
    Level : 50
    Experience : 5850

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    Character Name: Akira
    Alignment: Neutral
    Primary Magic: Fire Demon Slayer (2nd Gen)

    Re: Samedi

    Post by Akira on Sat May 30, 2015 7:23 pm

    Looking much better. Looks like your personality is alright! Nice. ^^ However, there are still a few things I see.
    - Under "Unique Characteristics" if you could capitalize the first word in the second sentence.
    - What would just make this better would be if you could remove all of the (Please list 3 Minimun).
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    Re: Samedi

    Post by Nameless on Sat May 30, 2015 7:26 pm

    Nice.

    When you think it is good to go, just say "Approved"


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    Re: Samedi

    Post by Akira on Sat May 30, 2015 7:35 pm

    I believe this is good now.

    Akira says Approved!
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    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
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    Re: Samedi

    Post by Nameless on Sat May 30, 2015 7:37 pm

    Age can be unknown, but apparent age or "believed" age needs to be known.

    Race also needs to be known. Some spells target certain races and deal extra damage to them, while dealing half to others.

    These are the only two things I'm going to point out.


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    Alignment: Neutral
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    Re: Samedi

    Post by Akira on Sat May 30, 2015 8:00 pm

    (Right. Sorry)
    Getting closer. Anyway, there are two more things I need you to fix.

    - Age is allowed to be unknown. However, could you maybe make a "guessed" age known. In other words, and age that your character would think they are.
    - As for Race, this cannot be unknown.
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    Character Name: Elizavetha Killan
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
    Primary Magic: Hell Demon Slayer

    Re: Samedi

    Post by Nameless on Sat May 30, 2015 8:01 pm

    Done.

    And when you think you are done...

    say approved.


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    Class : B
    Level : 50
    Experience : 5850

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Akira
    Alignment: Neutral
    Primary Magic: Fire Demon Slayer (2nd Gen)

    Re: Samedi

    Post by Akira on Sat May 30, 2015 8:09 pm

    (Ok I really think it this time!)

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    Class : A
    Level : 25
    Experience : 11225

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Elizavetha Killan
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
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    Re: Samedi

    Post by Nameless on Sat May 30, 2015 8:09 pm

    The height says (5'12")


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    Re: Samedi

    Post by Kaseki on Sat May 30, 2015 8:12 pm

    Nonetheless, you approved!

    make sure to lock the thread and move it to "Approved Characters"!

    (Don't forget to put it in the Request Sheet, so we know to color it too!)


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