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    Xia Armor Grade 1/2

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    Xia Armor Grade 1/2

    Post by Nameless on Sat May 20, 2017 6:11 pm

    Name: Medic's Gear
    Owner: @Nameless
    Type: Armor
    Rank: Strong
    Description:
    A weighted jacket and armored mask. It covers the full body. The hands are covered in metal.

    Weight: 25lbs
    Strengths:
    - Has it's own HP value (B-Rank hits = 50%)
    - It's fashionable
    Weaknesses:
    - Does not deal damage
    - It can be destroyed by a single A-rank spell hit or higher
    - Recovery is only for the owner
    - Doesn't allow easy movement
    - restricts vision (Tunnel vision)
    Ability: Passive 5%MP Recovery (Once per post)


    Last edited by Nameless on Sun May 21, 2017 3:37 pm; edited 4 times in total


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    Re: Xia Armor Grade 1/2

    Post by Xia Chikai on Sat May 20, 2017 6:13 pm

    Please provide a description or picture of your armor.
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    Re: Xia Armor Grade 1/2

    Post by Nameless on Sat May 20, 2017 6:15 pm

    bump


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    Re: Xia Armor Grade 1/2

    Post by Xia Chikai on Sat May 20, 2017 6:16 pm

    You need to provide a description of your armor, you can't just provide a picture.
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    Re: Xia Armor Grade 1/2

    Post by Nameless on Sat May 20, 2017 6:47 pm

    Bump.


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    Re: Xia Armor Grade 1/2

    Post by Xia Chikai on Sat May 20, 2017 6:56 pm

    Are you saying 'Has it's own HP value (B-Rank hits = 50%)' as in halving the damage? If so, please change it.
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    Re: Xia Armor Grade 1/2

    Post by Nameless on Sat May 20, 2017 7:15 pm

    "As in 2 B-ranked hits will break it."


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    Re: Xia Armor Grade 1/2

    Post by Xia Chikai on Sat May 20, 2017 7:19 pm

    Some of your weaknesses go by saying. You can say them, but you don't have to.

    You say, 'Cannot be used to protect other people (Fits only the owner)', but there is no owner. Could you please add an owner or fix that weakness?
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    Re: Xia Armor Grade 1/2

    Post by Nameless on Sat May 20, 2017 7:29 pm

    bump


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    Re: Xia Armor Grade 1/2

    Post by Xia Chikai on Sun May 21, 2017 2:48 pm

    You also say 'healing is for owner'. You've mentioned no ability for healing and, once again, there is also no owner.

    Add an owner to this and if you want to heal, you must make an ability.
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    Re: Xia Armor Grade 1/2

    Post by Nameless on Sun May 21, 2017 3:37 pm

    bump


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    Re: Xia Armor Grade 1/2

    Post by Xia Chikai on Sun May 21, 2017 3:40 pm

    You can choose to sell it or not.

    Other than that...

    Approved.
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    Re: Xia Armor Grade 1/2

    Post by Nameless on Sun May 21, 2017 3:58 pm

    FAILED. AGAIN.

    NO PROOF OF PURCHASE.

    Though grading was on point.

    STILL.

    THIS WILL GO ON UNTIL YOU POINT IT OUT.


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