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    Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Nameless on Sun May 21, 2017 4:14 pm

    Name: Envy's Sword
    Owner: Fate
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: Weak
    Description:
    Sword:
    Envy's sword is a standard sized katana with a green handle and sheath.
    Length: 24 inches
    Weight: 863 grams
    Strengths: (Please list minimum of 2)
    - Because it's so light he can move it fast
    - It deals D-ranked damage
    Weaknesses: (You must have one more weakness than strengths)
    - Because of it's weight it might not deal that much damage.
    - Is weak against long range.
    - Can be used by anyone.
    Ability: N/A

    Name: Admiral's Jacket
    Owner: @Eli
    Type: (Armor
    Rank: Strong
    Description:
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    It is a white, neck-to-ankle length jacket, colored white with patches of green at the ends of the sleeves and the edges of the neck. The jacket is made of polyester, and has green fur on the inside which makes a great insulator. The Mermaid Tail logo is located on the back.
    Strengths:
    - Keeps the wearer warm as hell
    - Can protect from damage
    Weaknesses: (You must have one more weakness than strengths)
    -Can be torn up after 8 D-Rank hits
    -Does not have a hood to protect the head.
    -This is only meant to fit certain body shapes.
    Ability: Insulator: The jacket provides a 3% resistance to attacks of the Ice element.


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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Xia Chikai on Sun May 21, 2017 8:42 pm

    For envy's sword, add one more strength.
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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Nameless on Sun May 21, 2017 8:46 pm

    bump


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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Xia Chikai on Sun May 21, 2017 9:29 pm

    For envy's sword, add one more strength.

    There is no ability for 'Weak' type armor. Either make it 'Strong' or remove the ability.
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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Nameless on Sun May 21, 2017 9:35 pm

    bump


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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Xia Chikai on Sun May 21, 2017 9:40 pm

    Can I have proof that you bought 'Admiral's Jacket'?
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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Nameless on Sun May 21, 2017 9:42 pm

    Let's just say for this instance, I did buy the jacket.

    So [Fake link]


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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Xia Chikai on Sun May 21, 2017 9:45 pm

    Can you add one more weakness for 'Envy's Sword'?
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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Nameless on Sun May 21, 2017 9:48 pm

    "bump"


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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Xia Chikai on Sun May 21, 2017 9:50 pm

    Either remove one strength or add one weakness to 'Envy's Blade' please.
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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Nameless on Sun May 21, 2017 9:51 pm

    "You keep telling me to add one thing, then remove what I just added..."


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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Xia Chikai on Sun May 21, 2017 9:53 pm

    I'm sorry for the confusion.

    Everything else looks good.

    Approved.
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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Nameless on Mon May 22, 2017 6:29 pm

    Nameless wrote:Name: Envy's Sword
    Owner: Fate
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: Weak
    Description:
    Sword:
    Envy's sword is a standard sized katana with a green handle and sheath.
    Length: 24 inches
    Weight: 863 grams
    Strengths: (Please list minimum of 2)
    - Because it's so light he can move it fast
    - It deals D-ranked damage
    Weaknesses: (You must have one more weakness than strengths)
    - Because of it's weight it might not deal that much damage.
    - Is weak against long range.
    - Can be used by anyone.
    Ability: N/A

    Name: Admiral's Jacket
    Owner: @Eli
    Type: (Armor
    Rank: Strong
    Description:
    Spoiler:
    It is a white, neck-to-ankle length jacket, colored white with patches of green at the ends of the sleeves and the edges of the neck. The jacket is made of polyester, and has green fur on the inside which makes a great insulator. The Mermaid Tail logo is located on the back.
    Strengths:
    - Keeps the wearer warm as hell
    - Can protect from damage
    Weaknesses: (You must have one more weakness than strengths)
    -Can be torn up after 8 D-Rank hits
    -Does not have a hood to protect the head.
    -This is only meant to fit certain body shapes.
    Ability: Insulator: The jacket provides a 3% resistance to attacks of the Ice element.

    You straight up failed.

    I want you to tell me why.

    http://www.unknownlandsrp.com/t45-item-template


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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Xia Chikai on Mon May 22, 2017 6:38 pm

    Is it the fact that they used the Enchanted Item Template instead of the Weapons/Armor Template?
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    Re: Xia Grade 4/4

    Post by Nameless on Mon May 22, 2017 6:40 pm

    No.

    Make a new topic. You see it at the top of every post when you make the app.


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