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    Shini Chikai
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    Sonya Grade 3/3

    Post by Shini Chikai on Mon May 22, 2017 6:49 pm


    Name: Shosei
    Owner: @Kasey
    Type: Weapon (Scythe)
    Rank: Weak
    Description:
    Spoiler:
    Length: the handle is 4'8'' long and the scythe is about 2'0''long
    Weight: 26lbs
    Strengths:
    - It's heavy meaning it has a lot of "oomph" in it's swings.
    - Deals damage
    Weaknesses: (
    - It is able to be broken
    - Leaves the user at a disadvantage when using it for long ranged enemies
    - It's a little heavy and hard to wield with precision
    Ability:


    Last edited by Shini Chikai on Sat Jun 03, 2017 5:08 pm; edited 2 times in total


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    Re: Sonya Grade 3/3

    Post by PhoenixRises101 on Wed May 24, 2017 9:22 am

    Hi! The name's Sonya and I will be your grader for today.

    For starters, I would like to ask you to please use the weapon templates we have on this site [shown in spoiler]. This makes it easier for us to grade as well as ensures that nothing has been left out. Once the template has been used, please bump and I'll get started on this asap~

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    Code:
    [b]Name:[/b] (What is it called?)
    [b]Owner:[/b] (Who does it belong to? [Names of main characters only, no companions.])
    [b]Type:[/b] (Armor, Weapon, or other?)
    [b]Rank:[/b] (Weak, Strong, Legendary or Sacred?)
    [b]Description:[/b] (A short description and an image if possible.)
    [b]Length:[/b] (How long is it? [WEAPONS ONLY]
    [b]Weight:[/b] (How heavy is it?)
    [b]Strengths:[/b] (Please list minimum of 2)
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    -
    [b]Weaknesses:[/b] (You must have one more weakness than strengths)
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    -
    -
    [b]Ability:[/b] (What special thing can your weapon do? [NOTE: Weak items get no abilities)
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    Re: Sonya Grade 3/3

    Post by Shini Chikai on Thu May 25, 2017 3:27 pm

    edited.


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    Re: Sonya Grade 3/3

    Post by PhoenixRises101 on Sat Jun 03, 2017 1:05 pm

    Mkays, so let's get started.
    1. I'd like to ask you to please remove the '[center]' codes. I'd also like you to put the image in a spoiler as well. This is so that the application becomes easier to read and grade. Spoiler + Image code provided below.

    Code:
    [spoiler][img]http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110903134747/vampirewars/images/a/a0/Modern_Scythe.png[/img][/spoiler]


    2. Please remove the things found in parenthesis and add 'N/A' under Abilities. All highlighted in light blue below:
    Strengths: (Please list minimum of 2)
    Weaknesses: (You must have one more weakness than strengths)
    Ability: (What special thing can your weapon do? [NOTE: Weak items get no abilities)

    3. Please add another ability and further explain what you mean by 'oomph.' I also need you to add in the damage it gives and how much damage it can take as well.


    Once done, feel free to bump and i'll look over it once more :D
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    Shini Chikai
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    Kuraikage

    Lineage : Weather Master
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 1114
    Sacred Shards : 3
    Class : B
    Level : 27
    Experience : 1275

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Shini Chikai
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Primary Magic: Jutsu

    Re: Sonya Grade 3/3

    Post by Shini Chikai on Sat Jun 03, 2017 5:10 pm

    bump


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