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    Post by Andr01d Mon Nov 30, 2015 3:29 pm

    Snakeform: The user is able to partially transform their body into that of a snake. In Cockatrice’s case, he has a serpentine tail and can protrude and retract serpent fangs from his beak at will.
    This looks like a free partial takeover. I'm not quite grasping what this is. You can grow fangs, a tail and only that? Like a hybrid bird?

    Description: The user lashes out with their serpent tail, sending a shower of poisoned scales across a 5m area centered at a point within 10m of him. Enemies in the scale barrage take 1 D-Rank damage and are afflicted with Venomancy.
    Venomancy.

    I don't know what it is. But it sounds like a Debuff or a marker of some kind, which no D-ranked spell can preform. You need to remove that.


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    Post by Cockatrice Tue Dec 01, 2015 8:20 am

    Bump for edits. The Snakeform is just fangs and a tail, yes; the ability is mostly to give him a few more ways to attack than simply his talons and beak.


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    Post by Kaseki Wed Dec 02, 2015 6:46 am

    I'm going to ask the magic description be at least 50 words long. That once sentence is way too short.


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    Post by Cockatrice Wed Dec 02, 2015 3:44 pm

    Bump, upgraded description


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    Post by Kaseki Thu Dec 03, 2015 1:35 pm

    Distance needs to be cut down, since you're spell is covering a large area.


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    Post by Cockatrice Mon Dec 07, 2015 10:55 am

    Bump. Any closer and I would be taking damage from the spell as well.


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    Post by Kaseki Mon Dec 07, 2015 11:04 am

    Note: For the size of spells, it is based off the cost of the range of the spell. A normal projectile is 1x1ft. For each additional foot added, a meter is removed from range.

    The reason I point this out, is you are sending a SHOWER of scales, not a set number. Meaning you are sending a 5m cloud of shrapnel over 6m of distance. By this rule it should be:
    - 5m cloud over no distance
    - 5ft cloud over 6m.

    Both seem to leave distaste for me. And even as an AoE (5m range, all around you.) doesn't seem to have the effect you want, even as an AoE in just in front. [Well actually maybe that might work.]

    So you have two choices:
    - Turn it into a half AoE (Each target taking a fraction of the total damage in range, max range 5m.)
    - Create a set number of scales. (Each scale being a fraction of D-ranked damage, max range of 10m.)


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    Post by Cockatrice Mon Dec 07, 2015 3:08 pm

    Edit Bump.


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