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    Post by Shini Chikai Thu Feb 18, 2016 8:06 pm

    Fix the spacing, I'm not reading anything until format is fixed.


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    Post by Jrepra Thu Feb 18, 2016 8:23 pm

    bump
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    Post by Shini Chikai Thu Feb 18, 2016 9:10 pm

    Freedom of movement: What the hell is this?

    Code:
    ● 3+ Classes below user : 50% Resistance (+5% Per Class after 3)
    ● 2 Classes below user : 50% Resistance
    ● 1 Class below user : 30% Resistance
    ● Equal Class of user : 25% Resistance
    ● 1 Class Above user : 10% Resistance
    ● 2 Classes Above user : 5% Resistance
    ● 3+ Classes above user : No resistance
    Code:
    - Spells 6 ranks below user : 60%
    - Spells 5 ranks below user : 50%
    - Spells 4 ranks below user :45%
    - Spells 3 ranks below user : 40%
    - Spells 2 ranks below user : 35%
    - Spells 1 rank below user :  30%
    - Spells equal ranked to user : 25%
    - Spells 1 rank above user : 10%
    - Spells 2 rank above user : 5%
    Your table shows me nothing. It's just numbers with no specifications.


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    Post by Jrepra Thu Feb 18, 2016 10:43 pm

    i copied the wrong table. my bad. there you go.
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    Post by Kaseki Fri Feb 19, 2016 1:05 am

    Cooldown time is ALWAYS more than duration.

    And you need to rework the spell. 10m from you is odd, and being able to move them at will is way too much.

    You can cast 2 portals, both 10m from each other, They they last 2/3 posts. They stay for that time, unless you cancel. Unless you can explain why you want it the way you have, because I see godmod.

    (Also you need size.)


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    Post by Jrepra Fri Feb 19, 2016 3:03 am

    Fixed again. specified size and more. I didn't see where it said cooldown had to be longer than the duration, but i capped the relocation for the portals to 1 at a time and once per post. The relocation ability itself is more for freedom of movement, as to fit the theme of it all. But a question, what should i do for the speed? The portals themselves are thrown, but that means that speed is based on how fast you throw it.
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    Post by Shini Chikai Fri Feb 19, 2016 2:38 pm

    Size of portals means they gotta be closer.

    And the [Cooldown > Duration] is more of common knowledge. Cooldown starts when the spell is cast. So if duration is equal to cooldown, the spell could be cast IMMEDIATELY, making it an insta-cast over and over, which is a huge no.

    Also, Pocket Space, you need to specificy what it's used for. It's vague, and compared to both the requipers and the teleporters, I have no idea what's going on here.


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    Post by Jrepra Sat Feb 20, 2016 2:53 am

    i have fixed a few things. How is it this time? :D

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