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Welcome to the world of Unknown Lands Roleplay Forum!

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The Unknown Lands of Pandora is regarded as a "Multiverse" forum or a "Free Forum" meaning that we are not based on a single series, but rather multiple with our own custom systems. Each "Kingdom" of Pandora is another anime/cartoon series with other various sub series that make up the entire land.

We can't wait to meet you!

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    Kaseki
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    Post by Kaseki Wed Apr 27, 2016 12:49 am

    Pandora isn't a person.

    You're F-Class, which is considered Genin.

    Virus doesn't exist in Pandora.

    Killer B is dead, long dead, leading to freed Gyuki. He was docile after the transition to Pandora, which was stated in the kingdom info.

    SHINI CHIKAI brought the ninja world to Pandora with a Starfall.

    The errors in the first paragraph show me how little of the lore you have grasped, or have read. It needs to be fixed, or you can wait for the next event at a chance for this to happen Via event.

    (This was by no means an easy task, and should not be taken lightly. Please read the information with great attention.)


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    Post by Aizen Wed Apr 27, 2016 2:32 am

    "Aizen was one of the many low ranked people who didnt have to help fight off the berserker Tailed Beast that was said to be so cool and calm back when it had been tamed by the legendary Killa B." 

    I was only bringing up how it was in the past
    I never mention the virus existing in Pandora

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    Character Name: Kaseki / Kodai
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    Post by Kaseki Wed Apr 27, 2016 1:02 pm

    Though the virus had stopped all of that, turning the beast into a ruthless killing machine
    Wither intended or not, it sounds like he still has the virus.

    In any case, your depiction of Shini is wrong. Going to ask you find the story lore and actually read the links.


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    Post by Aizen Wed Apr 27, 2016 3:00 pm

    fixed


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    Post by Kaseki Thu Apr 28, 2016 3:11 pm

    I see where you got the fuin seal, but I don't see where Gyuki was sealed.

    In addition, there's a lot of minor misspellings and ";" instead of the letter "L"

    Other than that, it seems overall fine.


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    Class : F
    Level : 1
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    Post by Aizen Thu Apr 28, 2016 5:33 pm

    fixed


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    The Owner of The Site

    Lineage : Gift of The Lion Turtle
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    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 4900
    Sacred Shards :
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    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Kaseki / Kodai
    Alignment: Lawful Neutral
    Primary Magic: Gift of The Lion Turtle

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    Post by Kaseki Fri Apr 29, 2016 2:10 pm

    Yound man, your small speech has motivated us all. It sounds like you can handle yourself in a dire situation. Your chakra also tell me that. We are prepping the Iron Armor Seal but we need a host for the Bijuu. Would you sacrifice yourself to seal this bijuu and bring peace back into the land. There is a chance you can die.”
    Spelling, grammar, and punctuation in that order.


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    Class : F
    Level : 1
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    Post by Aizen Fri Apr 29, 2016 3:28 pm

    Fixed


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