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    Post by Akira Fri Jun 10, 2016 7:13 pm

    Heartless Nobody wrote:Name: Vanitas Remnant
    Nickname: The Unknown drifter
    Gender: Male
    Race: Unknown Entity of darkness(Darkness)
    Age: Undetermined, but he appears to be in his teens to early 20's
    Birthday: October 31
    Sexuality: Straight
    Unique Characteristics: What makes Vanitas unique from all others is that he was created out of the darkness and negative emotions of all existing beings, being the embodiment of negative emotions, he has the properties to heal over time from the negative emotions of those around him, use the negative emotions of others to give himself power and many other features.

    Everything in red will need to be deleted and placed in your magic app. These can be used with the correct elements.

    Personality: (In 300 words describe your character. Provide information on how your character acts in a non-fighting environment as well as a fighting environment.)
    Delete everything in red.
    Vanitas overall is a dark and confused young man who has endured much suffering by the hands of master Xehanort in his desperate desire for salvation, he has now become cunning, proud and cruel in order to achieve perfect strength and to achieve his motives. He also believes that all that have nothing to do with his motives hold no value to him and he will then show no remorse for any actions taken upon anyone in his way of his motives or anyone that has nothing to do with his motives. He is a pragmatist who will strike anyone without a thought, warning or hesitation as he has many of his rivals. Even if he is under orders of someone, he will disregard these orders if the orders have no interest to his motives.
    He is uncaring, cold and a ruthless individual, having no sympathy for anyone but himself, he holds everyone in contempt for his very being and how he feels and he envy's those who have friends. He is cruel in antagonizing anyone for having fun or enjoying themselves. Vanitas will threaten anyone's loved ones to get what he wants.
    Vanitas is arrogant and believes his skills surpass all others and finds it funny if defeated. Vanitas will taunt his opponents without care of consequences
    He has an extreme overconfidence in his abilities, which usually leads to his downfall as he underestimates his opponents when fighting.
    The only time in the his entire existence Vanitas ever expresses genuine concern and fear is when he has been defeated by Ventus for the final time. He begins to panic and makes a desperate attempt to grab the floating χ-blade in a hopeless flurry to hold onto his only way of salvation before dying. Despite his villainous and fearsome persona, however, Vanitas was actually a tragic and sympathetic character, having become the way he was due to Xehanort's ambitions and manipulations.


    Likes: (Please list 3 Minimum)
    Delete the red.
    -Getting his way
    -The suffering of others
    -Boasting about himself

    Dislikes: (Please list 3 Minimum) Delete the parenthesis and everything within.
    - Happiness
    - People having fun together
    -people sharing affection and care for one another

    Motivations: (Please list 3 Minimum) Same as above.
    -Willing to grow stronger
    -the drive to be better than all
    - Belief in ones self

    Fears/Disgusts: (Please list 3 Minimum) Same as above.
    -Being defeated
    -love and kindness
    -happiness and joy

    Eyes: Darkish Yellow
    Hair: Black(white in remnant form) This remnant form will need to be explained in the Unique Characteristics section of this app.
    Height: 5.9
    Weight: 210
    Complexion: Palish white skin


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    Post by Guest Sat Jun 11, 2016 8:05 am

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    Origin : De Fiore
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    Character Name: Toriel Dremurr
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Primary Magic: ReQuip: Dremurr Armory

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    Post by Toriel Mon Jun 13, 2016 10:37 am

    Heartless Nobody wrote:Name: Vanitas Remnant
    Nickname: The Unknown drifter
    Gender: Male
    Race: Unknown Entity of darkness(Darkness)
    Age: Undetermined, but he appears to be in his teens to early 20's
    Birthday: October 31
    Sexuality: Straight
    Unique Characteristics: What makes Vanitas unique from all others is that he was created out of the darkness and negative emotions of all existing beings. Vanitas also has a remnant form that changes his appearance ever so slightly, this form is taken when Vanitas is killed as a remaining last will of Vanitas.  

    Personality:
    Vanitas overall is a dark and confused young man who has endured much suffering by the hands of master Xehanort in his desperate desire for salvation, he has now become cunning, proud and cruel in order to achieve perfect strength and to achieve his motives. He also believes that all that have nothing to do with his motives hold no value to him and he will then show no remorse for any actions taken upon anyone in his way of his motives or anyone that has nothing to do with his motives. He is a pragmatist who will strike anyone without a thought, warning or hesitation as he has many of his rivals. Even if he is under orders of someone, he will disregard these orders if the orders have no interest to his motives.
    He is uncaring, cold and a ruthless individual, having no sympathy for anyone but himself, he holds everyone in contempt for his very being and how he feels and he envy's those who have friends. He is cruel in antagonizing anyone for having fun or enjoying themselves. Vanitas will threaten anyone's loved ones to get what he wants.
    Vanitas is arrogant and believes his skills surpass all others and finds it funny if defeated. Vanitas will taunt his opponents without care of consequences
    He has an extreme overconfidence in his abilities, which usually leads to his downfall as he underestimates his opponents when fighting.
    The only time in the his entire existence Vanitas ever expresses genuine concern and fear is when he has been defeated by Ventus for the final time. He begins to panic and makes a desperate attempt to grab the floating χ-blade in a hopeless flurry to hold onto his only way of salvation before dying. Despite his villainous and fearsome persona, however, Vanitas was actually a tragic and sympathetic character, having become the way he was due to Xehanort's ambitions and manipulations.


    Likes:
    -Getting his way
    -The suffering of others
    -Boasting about himself

    Dislikes:
    - Happiness
    - People having fun together
    -people sharing affection and care for one another

    Motivations:
    -Willing to grow stronger
    -the drive to be better than all
    - Belief in ones self

    Fears/Disgusts:
    -Being defeated
    -love and kindness
    -happiness and joy

    Eyes: Darkish Yellow
    Hair: Black(white in remnant form)
    Height: 5.9
    Weight: 210
    Complexion: Palish white skin
    For the other form, is there any big difference from the normal one? (Height change, weight change, new powers, hair change, ect.) If so, please list those.

    This X-blade, what is that? Was this going to be something you were going to make down the line?

    5.9 is not a valid height. 5'9" is though.

    210 whats? Kilograms? Pounds? Grams?

    Make sure in the lists for the Likes/Dislikes/Ect. that the words are spaced out from the bullet and first letter is capitalized. The first two dislikes are prime examples.

    Bump these edits and we should be good to go! Good job!


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    Post by Guest Mon Jun 13, 2016 12:51 pm

    I've given the unqie details for the remnant form, The X-blade is a keyblade that Vanitas wished to create but failed in doing so. Thank you for pointing out that I forgot to place pounds and the thing for the inches and it's funny how I had that going nicely and derped up half way but thanks for pointing out the likes and dislikes and other things like that it does make it look more presentable.
    I believe I can bump this now, but feel there are still issues.
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    Post by Toriel Mon Jun 13, 2016 2:28 pm

    Heartless Nobody wrote:Name: Vanitas Remnant
    Nickname: The Unknown drifter
    Gender: Male
    Race: Unknown Entity of darkness(Darkness)
    Age: Undetermined, but he appears to be in his teens to early 20's
    Birthday: October 31
    Sexuality: Straight
    Unique Characteristics: What makes Vanitas unique from all others is that he was created out of the darkness and negative emotions of all existing beings. Vanitas also has a remnant form that changes his appearance of armor and hair with the addition of new powers such as the advance ability to mimic the magic of others used against him

    Personality:
    Vanitas overall is a dark and confused young man who has endured much suffering by the hands of master Xehanort in his desperate desire for salvation, he has now become cunning, proud and cruel in order to achieve perfect strength and to achieve his motives. He also believes that all that have nothing to do with his motives hold no value to him and he will then show no remorse for any actions taken upon anyone in his way of his motives or anyone that has nothing to do with his motives. He is a pragmatist who will strike anyone without a thought, warning or hesitation as he has many of his rivals. Even if he is under orders of someone, he will disregard these orders if the orders have no interest to his motives.
    He is uncaring, cold and a ruthless individual, having no sympathy for anyone but himself, he holds everyone in contempt for his very being and how he feels and he envy's those who have friends. He is cruel in antagonizing anyone for having fun or enjoying themselves. Vanitas will threaten anyone's loved ones to get what he wants.
    Vanitas is arrogant and believes his skills surpass all others and finds it funny if defeated. Vanitas will taunt his opponents without care of consequences
    He has an extreme overconfidence in his abilities, which usually leads to his downfall as he underestimates his opponents when fighting.
    The only time in the his entire existence Vanitas ever expresses genuine concern and fear is when he has been defeated by Ventus for the final time. He begins to panic and makes a desperate attempt to grab the floating χ-blade in a hopeless flurry to hold onto his only way of salvation before dying. Despite his villainous and fearsome persona, however, Vanitas was actually a tragic and sympathetic character, having become the way he was due to Xehanort's ambitions and manipulations.


    Likes:
    - Getting his way
    - The suffering of others
    - Boasting about himself

    Dislikes:
    - Happiness
    - People having fun together
    - People sharing affection and care for one another

    Motivations:
    - Willing to grow stronger
    - The drive to be better than all
    - Belief in ones self

    Fears/Disgusts:
    - Being defeated
    - Love and kindness
    - Happiness and joy

    Eyes: Darkish Yellow
    Hair: Black(white in remnant form)
    Height: 5"9"
    Weight: 210 lbs
    Complexion: Palish white skin

    I will have to deny this, at least for a passive ability with your character. If you want this, consider making a magic with this being one of the spells. The cosmetic changes are fine, but for any additional powers I would recommend including it in your magic when you make it.


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    Post by Guest Mon Jun 13, 2016 5:07 pm

    understood and taken care of.
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    Character Name: Toriel Dremurr
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Primary Magic: ReQuip: Dremurr Armory

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    Post by Toriel Mon Jun 13, 2016 5:14 pm

    Lastly, change 5"9" to 5'9"


    Super small, but makes a difference.


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    Post by Guest Mon Jun 13, 2016 5:18 pm

    *face palms* fail on my half. taken care of

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