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    Kaseki
    Kaseki
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    Lineage : Gift of The Lion Turtle
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 4899
    Sacred Shards :
    Class : Ω
    Level :
    Experience :

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Kaseki / Kodai
    Alignment: Lawful Neutral
    Primary Magic: Gift of The Lion Turtle

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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 24, 2016 2:43 pm

    Name: Venus Tsar
    Nickname: N/A
    Gender: Female
    Race: Angel (specifically, Guardian)
    Age: Ageless, but appearing 16.
    Birthday: 2/ 14
    Sexuality: Straight
    Unique Characteristics:
    -Pretty Angel Wings (30meters)
    Personality:
    I shall tell you about mt character, Venus Tsar. Venus is a young girl full of wisdom and long lost knowledge of the hidden arts. She is incredibly shy at first, but warms up after several interactions. Many times, her curious nature causes her to get out of her comfort zone and talk to random strangers. This, as you may already presume, may lead her to trouble. Venus is a warm hearted person always willing to do her best and get things done. She is both blessed and cursed with a strong will and may prove to be quite stubborn. She is a loyal soul and never leaves a friend behind. If in line of battle, she will force her way back to save her ally and friend. As she was raised with no human contact, Venus may not oftentimes know what some mechanisms that humans use at all and so therefore she may come off as naive.  She enjoys games of chance, mysteries, adventures, exploring, riddles, puzzles, carnivals, haunted houses, snowball fights, spicy food, mocking others, sarcasm, dark humor, British television, chemistry, deep sea creatures, dinosaurs, hockey, futbol, late night comedy shows, hot pockets, spaghetti, tye dye purses, toe socks, gas masks, tiny bells, long bits of string, lanterns, the smell of napalm in the morning, and cinnamon among other things. Overall he is a man of many indulgences and he is oft of a cheerful disposition. Though when he is the opposite, it can become fearsome indeed. While not outright rude Rocinante Pazuzu was not raised with any sort of etiquette and will often do things that others would find offensive such as belching at the table.

    As odd as his magic, the creature often finds himself in conversations just to study others. Interactions, especially social ones interest the Q even though he has live forever. While he is not sure of how he ended up in this universe, he has not found nearly everything there is to see here. As such Rocinante is extremely curious and adventurous often going places just for the experience or at random. Overall he is a kind person, though he does not shy from killing if it is needed though he hates to judge such things. Rocinante does not hide or run from conflict but he does his best to resolve it before things get bloody.
    Likes:
    - The Moon. Her father is the god of the Moon and so she has always held the moon in a special place in her heart.
    - The outdoors. She enjoys being out in the the great outdoors. She feels at home there.
    -Meeting new people. Venus is very social so she likes meeting new people.
    Dislikes:
    - Feeling Weak. Venus likes feeling capable of doing something, therefore she detests feeling helpless and weak.
    - When people don't count on her because she's too little.
    - Close mindedness
    Motivations:
    - Reaching her full potential as a Giardian
    - Living up to the Gaurdian legacy in keeping the balance between Chaos and Order
    - Perfecting her magic.
    Fears/Disgusts:
    - Not being able to fulfill the Guardian legacy.
    - Although she doesn't want to admit it, Venus is afraid of thunder.
    Injustice
    Eyes: Bloody Red Eyes
    Hair: White
    Height: 5'5
    Weight: 120lbs. 
    Complexion: Pale creamy peach skin

    Level: 1
    Class: F


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    Kodai
    Kodai

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    Lineage : Gift of The Lion Turtle
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 816
    Sacred Shards : 7
    Class : F
    Level : 1
    Experience : 0

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    Post by Kodai Fri Nov 25, 2016 2:42 pm

    @Rin

    Grade this as your would any other app.


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    Anonymous
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    Post by Guest Sun Nov 27, 2016 5:03 pm

    Hi, I'll be grading your app today, please message me privately for any questions or concerns you may have regarding any corrections I give.

    Corrections:
    -Personality is only 158 words long, needs to be 300 words minimum. Also needs to include a paragraph on how she is in combat.
    -Misspelled guardian in the first motivation
    -You need to add one more fear because three is the minimum and you currently only have two.
    -The angel wings, they should not just be 30 meters. I need you to list the wing span and the height. They must be within reason. Meaning, they need to be a height and width that a real life human could use to fly and wouldn't be weighed down.
    -One last thing, I need you to put her height like this: 5'5" or like this: 5 ft 5 in.

    Once all these corrections are made, please bump.
    Fetus
    Fetus
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    Lineage : Martyr's Soul
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 989
    Sacred Shards : 16
    Class : C
    Level : 23
    Experience : 10870

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Fetus
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Primary Magic: Dog

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    Post by Fetus Sun Nov 27, 2016 5:17 pm

    "ok bump"


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