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    Name: Mikahail Maximilian
    Nickname: King Mickey or King Max (Also known as Knight M84)
    Gender: Boy
    Race: A Mouse, that's right muddafuka! I'm a mouse!
    Age: 35
    Birthday: 1 / 23
    Sexuality: Straight
    Unique Characteristics:
    Personality:  King Mikahail Maximilian also known as King Mickey or King max is a calm relaxed, level headed type of mouse; he thinks with his head but listens to his heart. Max has a strong sense of justice and determination. Max will try his best resolve conflict without using conflict, but if he has to Max will use his power to protect those in need.

    Max is super level headed, he rarely gets angry. Max can usually be seen smiling and laughing. He tries to do his best to look at the bright side of things, Max possesses unyielding hope for the light within everyone, and he believes that light will triumph despite the darkness that surrounds the world. Max will never betray a friend; he will protect those he cares about till the death. Even so Max will stay out of the lives he cares about, he strongly believes that everyone has their own path that they should walk, if a someone Max cares about feels lost or on the verge of darkness he will help them find their way once more.

    Max is extremely independent; he feels that he should burden his duties as a king by himself, despite his lone warrior façade. Max trusts his friends and will not doubt his friends’ abilities. He is the peace maker of the kingdom, he has immense patience and hope for those who abide in the darkness, and he believes that there is good in everyone. Max is a strong leader he brings his subordinates together with his powerful and charismatic words.

    When Max works in a team he will do his best to support everyone. In battle Max will often spare his opponent, but he will not hesitate to slay his opponent if they plot to harm his friends or his kingdom.  Max is extremely humble and dislikes it when his friends and people call him a king or a hero.
    Likes:
    - Peace
    - His Kingdom
    - Women

    Dislikes:
    - Unnecessarily violence
    - Cheese, Ironically Max is lactose intolerant
    - People

    Motivations:
    - Protecting his kingdom
    - To create peace between all nations
    - To help those in need

    Fears/Disgusts:
    - War
    - That evil will triumph over good
    - Failing his kingdom and his people

    Eyes: Gray
    Hair: black
    Height: 3 foot 5 inches
    Weight: 134lbs
    Complexion: Uh.... I don't know, fair skin?


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    Post by Shini Chikai Thu Nov 24, 2016 3:54 pm

    @Shane grade this app as you would any other app.

    After, we will go over what was missed (if anything was) as well and other little things.


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    Post by Shane Thu Nov 24, 2016 4:46 pm

    @Kaseki wrote:
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    Name: Mikahail Maximilian
    Nickname: King Mickey or King Max (Also known as Knight M84)
    Gender: Boy
    Race: A Mouse, that's right muddafuka! I'm a mouse!
    Age: 35
    Birthday: 1 / 23
    Sexuality: Straight
    Unique Characteristics: Seriously.... do you really need to ask? I'm a mouse for crying out loud, just look at my Avatar.
    Personality: King Mikahail Maximilian also known as King Mickey or King max is a calm, relaxed, level headed type of mouse; he thinks with his head but listens to his heart. Max has a strong sense of justice and determination. Max will try his best resolve conflict without using conflict, but if he has to Max will use his power to protect those in need. Max is super level headed, he rarely gets angry.
    Likes: (Please list 3 Minimum)
    - Peace
    - His Kingdom
    - Women

    Dislikes: (Please list 3 Minimum)
    - Unnecessarily violence
    - Cheese, Ironically Max is lactose intolerant

    Motivations: (Please list 3 Minimum)
    - Protecting his kingdom
    - To create peace between all nations
    - To help those in need

    Fears/Disgusts: (Please list 3 Minimum)
    - War
    - That evil will triumph over good
    - Failing his kingdom and his people

    Eyes: Gray
    Hair: I don't have hair.... I'm a mouse, I have black fur.
    Height: 3 foot 5 inches
    Weight: 134lbs
    Complexion: Uh.... I don't know, fair skin?

    Personality is only 73 words, it should be 300.

    Please remove the (3 Minimum) tags.

    You only have 2 Dislikes, please add a third.

    There is some missing punctuation in your personality, please fix it.

    Yes we do have to ask unique characteristics, please describe them in words or a reference picture.

    Please, if you have fur all over your body, put the fur color under hair and N/A under Complexion as it does not apply to your character.

    Please just put your race, no need to furthur add to that section.


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    Post by Shini Chikai Thu Nov 24, 2016 5:02 pm

    bump


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    Post by Shane Thu Nov 24, 2016 5:12 pm

    @Kaseki wrote:
    test app 2 9-64
    Name: Mikahail Maximilian
    Nickname: King Mickey or King Max (Also known as Knight M84)
    Gender: Boy
    Race: A Mouse, that's right muddafuka! I'm a mouse!
    Age: 35
    Birthday: 1 / 23
    Sexuality: Straight
    Unique Characteristics:
    Personality: King Mikahail Maximilian also known as King Mickey or King max is a calm relaxed, level headed type of mouse; he thinks with his head but listens to his heart. Max has a strong sense of justice and determination. Max will try his best resolve conflict without using conflict, but if he has to Max will use his power to protect those in need. Max is super level headed, he rarely gets angry. Most of the time begins with him oversleeping and having to be woken up by some other character. However, even as seemingly harmless, Zeon carries a tainted soul full of evil and corruption. Upon the great falling of the starfalls he kills his own father. This reason was solely because of distrust, and the "wasting of a wish". He finds his mother was dead and the wish made by his father. Little did Zeon know that they wanted to have their own son back, and his mother gave up her life for that. Zeon is a ruthless killer with no remorse for anything. He will gladly pit his own teammates against each other if it means he does not have to share his rewards. He will use his sword just so he can have a swift kill in the eyes of the world. He cares not of how he does it, only that he can paint the town red with the blood of the fallen.

    Zeon is a hard to relate-to kind of character. He will look down upon everyone he meets and will put them down, or point out that he is greater. He's essentially the school bully who never grew up. One could say that this is something of a "short man's complex" but you could never be sure. He's not an easy to read person with all of his emotions on lockdown. He will steal from anyone, and literally, ANYONE. He'll kill his friends, stab his family, betray people just for fun. This is the soul of Zeon Eldia.
    Likes: )
    - Peace
    - His Kingdom
    - Women

    Dislikes: (
    - Unnecessarily violence
    - Cheese, Ironically Max is lactose intolerant
    - People

    Motivations: (
    - Protecting his kingdom
    - To create peace between all nations
    - To help those in need

    Fears/Disgusts:
    - War
    - That evil will triumph over good
    - Failing his kingdom and his people

    Eyes: Gray
    Hair: IFur
    Height: 3 foot 5 inches
    Weight: 134lbs
    Complexion: Uh.... I don't know, fair skin?

    Please remove the extra ( from likes, Dislikes, and Motivations. Under hair, please put what color fur, not merely "IFur". Your personality seems to conflict your fears/likes/dislikes/motivations, please add the likes/dislikes/Motivations of that double Personality if that is a double Personality.


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    Post by Shini Chikai Thu Nov 24, 2016 5:40 pm

    bump


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    Level : 68
    Experience : 56125

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    Alignment: Neutral Good
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    Post by Shane Thu Nov 24, 2016 5:44 pm

    Please, put the color of the fur, not just furr. Please separate Personality into two paragraphs and bump when finished.


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    Alignment: Lawful Good
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    Post by Shini Chikai Thu Nov 24, 2016 5:51 pm

    bump


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    Post by Shane Thu Nov 24, 2016 5:53 pm

    Please separate Personality into two paragraphs


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    Post by Shini Chikai Thu Nov 24, 2016 5:54 pm

    where?


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    Post by Shane Thu Nov 24, 2016 5:58 pm

    Where it gets to combat, make it into two paragraphs


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    Post by Shini Chikai Thu Nov 24, 2016 6:30 pm

    but where tho?


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    Post by Shane Thu Nov 24, 2016 6:37 pm

    @Kaseki wrote:
    test app 2 9-64
    Name: Mikahail Maximilian
    Nickname: King Mickey or King Max (Also known as Knight M84)
    Gender: Boy
    Race: A Mouse, that's right muddafuka! I'm a mouse!
    Age: 35
    Birthday: 1 / 23
    Sexuality: Straight
    Unique Characteristics:
    Personality:  King Mikahail Maximilian also known as King Mickey or King max is a calm relaxed, level headed type of mouse; he thinks with his head but listens to his heart. Max has a strong sense of justice and determination. Max will try his best resolve conflict without using conflict, but if he has to Max will use his power to protect those in need. Max is super level headed, he rarely gets angry. Max can usually be seen smiling and laughing. He tries to do his best to look at the bright side of things, Max possesses unyielding hope for the light within everyone, and he believes that light will triumph despite the darkness that surrounds the world. Max will never betray a friend; he will protect those he cares about till the death. Even so Max will stay out of the lives he cares about, he strongly believes that everyone has their own path that they should walk, if a someone Max cares about feels lost or on the verge of darkness he will help them find their way once more. Max is extremely independent; he feels that he should burden his duties as a king by himself, despite his lone warrior façade Max trusts his friends and will not doubt his friends’ abilities. He is the peace maker of the kingdom, he has immense patience and hope for those who abide in the darkness, and he believes that there is good in everyone. Max is a strong leader he brings his subordinates together with his powerful and charismatic words. When Max works in a team he will do his best to support everyone. In battle Max will often spare his opponent, but he will not hesitate to slay his opponent if they plot to harm his friends or his kingdom.  Max is extremely humble and dislikes it when his friends and people call him a king or a hero.
    Likes:
    - Peace
    - His Kingdom
    - Women

    Dislikes:
    - Unnecessarily violence
    - Cheese, Ironically Max is lactose intolerant
    - People

    Motivations:
    - Protecting his kingdom
    - To create peace between all nations
    - To help those in need

    Fears/Disgusts:
    - War
    - That evil will triumph over good
    - Failing his kingdom and his people

    Eyes: Gray
    Hair: black
    Height: 3 foot 5 inches
    Weight: 134lbs
    Complexion: Uh.... I don't know, fair skin?

    Where it is highlighted. Bump when finished.


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    Experience : 1275

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    Post by Shini Chikai Thu Nov 24, 2016 6:44 pm

    ok


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    Level : 68
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    Character Name: Shane Mystic
    Alignment: Neutral Good
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    Post by Shane Thu Nov 24, 2016 6:48 pm

    @Kaseki wrote:
    test app 2 9-64
    Name: Mikahail Maximilian
    Nickname: King Mickey or King Max (Also known as Knight M84)
    Gender: Boy
    Race: A Mouse, that's right muddafuka! I'm a mouse!
    Age: 35
    Birthday: 1 / 23
    Sexuality: Straight
    Unique Characteristics:
    Personality:  King Mikahail Maximilian also known as King Mickey or King max is a calm relaxed, level headed type of mouse; he thinks with his head but listens to his heart. Max has a strong sense of justice and determination. Max will try his best resolve conflict without using conflict, but if he has to Max will use his power to protect those in need. Max is super level headed, he rarely gets angry. Max can usually be seen smiling and laughing. He tries to do his best to look at the bright side of things, Max possesses unyielding hope for the light within everyone, and he believes that light will triumph despite the darkness that surrounds the world. Max will never betray a friend; he will protect those he cares about till the death. Even so Max will stay out of the lives he cares about, he strongly believes that everyone has their own path that they should walk, if a someone Max cares about feels lost or on the verge of darkness he will help them find their way once more. Max is extremely independent; he feels that he should burden his duties as a king by himself, despite his lone warrior façade Max trusts his friends and will not doubt his friends’ abilities. He is the peace maker of the kingdom, he has immense patience and hope for those who abide in the darkness, and he believes that there is good in everyone. Max is a strong leader he brings his subordinates together with his powerful and charismatic words.

    When Max works in a team he will do his best to support everyone. In battle Max will often spare his opponent, but he will not hesitate to slay his opponent if they plot to harm his friends or his kingdom.  Max is extremely humble and dislikes it when his friends and people call him a king or a hero.
    Likes:
    - Peace
    - His Kingdom
    - Women

    Dislikes:
    - Unnecessarily violence
    - Cheese, Ironically Max is lactose intolerant
    - People

    Motivations:
    - Protecting his kingdom
    - To create peace between all nations
    - To help those in need

    Fears/Disgusts:
    - War
    - That evil will triumph over good
    - Failing his kingdom and his people

    Eyes: Gray
    Hair: black
    Height: 3 foot 5 inches
    Weight: 134lbs
    Complexion: Uh.... I don't know, fair skin?

    Separate where highlighted for appearances sake, and ad a pero8d to the end of the second highlighted sentence


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    Post by Shini Chikai Thu Nov 24, 2016 7:15 pm

    ok


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    Level : 68
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    Character Name: Shane Mystic
    Alignment: Neutral Good
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    Post by Shane Thu Nov 24, 2016 7:16 pm

    I think that's all. Probably missed something, but I can't find anything wrong.


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    Experience :

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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 24, 2016 7:32 pm

    @Kaseki wrote:
    test app 2 9-64
    Name: Mikahail Maximilian
    Nickname: King Mickey or King Max (Also known as Knight M84)
    Gender: Boy This should be "Male"
    Race: A Mouse, that's right muddafuka! I'm a mouse! Why ask for the edit but not follow up on it?
    Age: 35
    Birthday: 1 / 23 Birthdate has to be month (Spelled out) and day (Number is fine) Reason? Some characters are other worldly, and not all worlds use the same calendar. Even "unknown" is okay here.
    Sexuality: Straight
    Unique Characteristics: "N/A" is always a great thing to use to fill in dead space.
    [] Have the app spaced out for easy reading, both on mobile and everyone's PC set up.
    Personality:  King Mikahail Maximilian also known as King Mickey or King max is a calm relaxed, level headed type of mouse; he thinks with his head but listens to his heart. Max has a strong sense of justice and determination. Max will try his best resolve conflict without using conflict, but if he has to Max will use his power to protect those in need.

    Max is super level headed, he rarely gets angry. Max can usually be seen smiling and laughing. He tries to do his best to look at the bright side of things, Max possesses unyielding hope for the light within everyone, and he believes that light will triumph despite the darkness that surrounds the world. Max will never betray a friend; he will protect those he cares about till the death. Even so Max will stay out of the lives he cares about, he strongly believes that everyone has their own path that they should walk, if a someone Max cares about feels lost or on the verge of darkness he will help them find their way once more.

    Max is extremely independent; he feels that he should burden his duties as a king by himself, despite his lone warrior façade. Max trusts his friends and will not doubt his friends’ abilities. He is the peace maker of the kingdom, he has immense patience and hope for those who abide in the darkness, and he believes that there is good in everyone. Max is a strong leader he brings his subordinates together with his powerful and charismatic words.

    When Max works in a team he will do his best to support everyone. In battle Max will often spare his opponent, but he will not hesitate to slay his opponent if they plot to harm his friends or his kingdom.  Max is extremely humble and dislikes it when his friends and people call him a king or a hero.
    [] same spacing issue
    Likes:
    - Peace
    - His Kingdom
    - Women

    Dislikes:
    - Unnecessarily violence
    - Cheese, Ironically Max is lactose intolerant
    - People

    Motivations:
    - Protecting his kingdom
    - To create peace between all nations
    - To help those in need

    Fears/Disgusts:
    - War
    - That evil will triumph over good
    - Failing his kingdom and his people

    Eyes: Gray
    Hair: black
    Height: 3 foot 5 inches
    Weight: 134lbs
    Complexion: Uh.... I don't know, fair skin?
    None of this was bolded. Also capitaliztoin and just useless text.

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    Post by Shane Thu Nov 24, 2016 7:45 pm

    Approved.


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