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    Lineage : Blood Brothers Pact
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 96
    Sacred Shards : 0
    Class : F
    Level : 1
    Experience : 5

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Xia Chikai
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Primary Magic: Astral Magic

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    Post by Xia Chikai Sat May 13, 2017 7:42 pm

    Hello! I'll be grading your character today.

    Let's start with the personality. The personality is supposed to be a minimum of 300 words, please add more onto that. A tip: talk about what your character does in his free time, what he does in battle, and what he is like as a commander or in his village.

    For likes you're supposed to have a minimum of three. Add one more and you'll be just fine!

    And finally, the height of your character. Your character is way too tall/large. You will either have to go below 6'1" or give a good enough reasoning for your height and then have Neo Stigma, a fellow mod, approve it.

    That's all. Thank you!
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    Lineage : Demon of Time
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 846
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : S
    Level : 76
    Experience : 118440

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Aknaid
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Primary Magic: Art of Mummification

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    Post by Andr01d Sat May 13, 2017 8:38 pm

    Bump.


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    Xia Chikai
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    Lineage : Blood Brothers Pact
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 96
    Sacred Shards : 0
    Class : F
    Level : 1
    Experience : 5

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Xia Chikai
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Primary Magic: Astral Magic

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    Post by Xia Chikai Sat May 13, 2017 8:51 pm

    We're almost there. You're currently at 281 words in your personality, just a few more words and you'll be fine. I'd also like to request that you put, how he acts in battle, and how he acts as a leader as well.

    Your birthday is fine, you just have to put the month and day. Example: January 24th. You will also have to change your sexuality. There are three options: Gay, Straight, or Bi. Please pick from those three unless you're Pansexual, etc.

    I'm assuming that you want to keep your height the same or have another mod grade it? If not, could you please change it to 6'1" or under? Your height seems to be malfunctioning as well. Instead of 7"3 please put 7'3", or whatever you change your height too.

    For race, we don't mean skin color, we mean what kind of species are you. Human, Snake, what are you as a creature? If you don't mind, please change that as well. You can speak about your skin color in your personality/description.

    With hair, what do you mean N/A? Is he bald? If so, please put that he is bald.

    Thank you.
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    Lineage : Demon of Time
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 846
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : S
    Level : 76
    Experience : 118440

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Aknaid
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Primary Magic: Art of Mummification

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    Post by Andr01d Sat May 13, 2017 9:12 pm

    Bump


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    Lineage : Blood Brothers Pact
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 96
    Sacred Shards : 0
    Class : F
    Level : 1
    Experience : 5

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Xia Chikai
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Primary Magic: Astral Magic

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    Post by Xia Chikai Sat May 13, 2017 10:29 pm

    Great! You've got more than needed for the personality. What's up with all the name changes though, you should stick with one name for your character. I'll highlight everything you need to edit and provide reasons.

    Needed Edits:

    Name: Darkurr
    Nickname: The Shadow Knight
    Gender: Male
    Race: Human kinda What do you mean by 'kinda'. You'll have to be more specific. Part human and part something else. One-fourth or one-half of the other race? Etc.
    Age: Timeless What do you mean timeless? Is he ageless? Is he immortal? You'll have to be more specific here. Just let me tell you now, he can't be immortal.
    Birthday: January 24th
    Sexuality: Pansexual
    Unique Characteristics: White flame on his head that seems to disappear in the shadows

    Personality: A man and soldier of the shadows. He has become a recluse and a hermit by cutting off any and all connections to the outside world. He talks little so he can listen. He watches those that cannot watch themselves. He is the all-seeing eye, living in places long abandoned. He is silent in his movements and makes sure not to disturb. This is how he earned the name "The shadow knight". A drunken sailor who strives for riches. He got his taste of wealth from his father, Indiana Bones. He prefers to sail the seas in search of lost treasure with ship battles rather than trap infested temples. ravage Bones (You've changed the name. Also, if his last name is bones, please put it in the character name) is a corrupt being that only lives for the sake of money. He will push his friends overboard for a few extra Beli. He is a heart pirate that seeks nothing else but fortune. He finds that friendship is temporary, and would gladly end a man's life. He loves to drink and only in those times is he full of love and care. A cruel, malevolent and calculating character. Zeon (Changed name again. Please stick to one name.) does not show signs of a strong and deep personality, nor does he present much of his personal motivations. However, the idea that Zeon (Changed name again. Please stick to one name.) is mute is disproved by his ability to interact with other characters in conversation. Zeon (Changed name again. Please stick to one name.) also seems to have a particular fondness for sleeping. Most of the time begins with him oversleeping and having to be woken up by some other character. However, even as seemingly harmless, Zeon (Changed name again. Please stick to one name.) carries a tainted soul full of evil and corruption. Upon the great falling of the star falls he kills his own father. This reason was solely because of distrust, and the "wasting of a wish". He finds his mother was dead and the wish made by his father. Little did Zeon (Changed name again. Please stick to one name.) know that they wanted to have their own son back, and his mother gave up her life for that. Zeon (Changed name again. Please stick to one name.) is a ruthless killer with no remorse for anything. He will gladly pit his own teammates against each other if it means he does not have to share his rewards. He will use his sword just so he can have a swift kill in the eyes of the world. He cares not of how he does it, only that he can paint the town red with the blood of the fallen.

    Zeon (Changed name again. Please stick to one name.) is a hard to relate to kind of character. He will look down upon everyone he meets and will put them down, or point out that he is greater. He's essentially the school bully who never grew up. One could say that this is something of a "short man's complex" but you could never be sure. He's not an easy to read person with all of his emotions on lockdown. He will steal from anyone, and literally, ANYONE. He'll kill his friends, stab his family, betray people just for fun. This is the soul of Zeon Eldia (Changed name again. Please stick to one name.).

    But just because he doesn't believe in friendship, does not mean his family is exclusive. He selects his family very closely, only to ensure that he doesn't get used or left behind. Because of this, Ravage appears distant and hard to approach. He hates losing those he cares about. So he figures, if there is no one to care about, we will have nothing to lose.

    He appears as a coldhearted deadman when in actuality he is a loving and caring individual with a passion for food. He doesn't like getting attached to people, but to those that are close, he will always care for them.

    Likes: (Please list 3 Minimum)
    - Quiet
    - Rum
    - Money
    - Ships
    - Singing

    Dislikes: (Please list 3 Minimum)
    - Nameless Give reasoning for why you dislike Nameless.
    - The Agency Give reasoning for why you dislike The Agency.
    - Noisy people

    Motivations: (Please list 3 Minimum)
    - World Peace
    - Getting Sleep
    - Free time... lots of it

    Fears/Disgusts: (Please list 3 Minimum)
    - What lurks in the darkness
    - Cracks in concrete (Superstitions) Could you just put Superstitions or Cracks in concrete but not both?
    - What Aknaid does with his laundry Who or what is Aknaid and what does he do with his laundry?

    Eyes: White
    Hair: N/A Please change to bald.
    Height: 7"3 Please change to normal height. 6'1" or below. Correctly write down the height as well.
    Weight: 168lbs
    Complexion: Pale
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    Son of The Demon of Life || Father of the Demon of Logic

    Lineage : Demon of Time
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 846
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : S
    Level : 76
    Experience : 118440

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Aknaid
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Primary Magic: Art of Mummification

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    Post by Andr01d Sun May 14, 2017 2:04 pm

    Bro, look at my siggy, I'M Aknaid. lol

    Anyways bump.


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    Lineage : Blood Brothers Pact
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 96
    Sacred Shards : 0
    Class : F
    Level : 1
    Experience : 5

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Xia Chikai
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Primary Magic: Astral Magic

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    Post by Xia Chikai Sun May 14, 2017 2:20 pm

    We're almost there!

    I request that you please change the height.The site rules state that characters must be 6'1" or under. If not, then properly put it to 7'1", and I'll have Neo Stigma approve it. Also, for your weight, is your character very muscular, and that's why he weighs a lot? I expect as the height changes, the weight will also change.

    If you're Half-Human, what half of another race are you?
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    Son of The Demon of Life || Father of the Demon of Logic

    Lineage : Demon of Time
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 846
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : S
    Level : 76
    Experience : 118440

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Aknaid
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Primary Magic: Art of Mummification

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    Post by Andr01d Sun May 14, 2017 2:34 pm

    Bump


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    Lineage : Blood Brothers Pact
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 96
    Sacred Shards : 0
    Class : F
    Level : 1
    Experience : 5

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Xia Chikai
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Primary Magic: Astral Magic

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    Post by Xia Chikai Sun May 14, 2017 2:58 pm

    Could you remove the (Please list a Minimum of 3) by likes, dislikes, motivations, and fears/disgust?
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    Son of The Demon of Life || Father of the Demon of Logic

    Lineage : Demon of Time
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 846
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : S
    Level : 76
    Experience : 118440

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Aknaid
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Primary Magic: Art of Mummification

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    Post by Andr01d Sun May 14, 2017 2:59 pm

    Bump


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    Xia Chikai
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    Lineage : Blood Brothers Pact
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 96
    Sacred Shards : 0
    Class : F
    Level : 1
    Experience : 5

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Xia Chikai
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Primary Magic: Astral Magic

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    Post by Xia Chikai Sun May 14, 2017 3:05 pm

    Could you put a space between likes and personality?

    Example:
    ...child, because of growing up alone with no friends or siblings.

    Likes:
    - Quiet
    - Rum
    - Money
    - Ships
    - Singing
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    Son of The Demon of Life || Father of the Demon of Logic

    Lineage : Demon of Time
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 846
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : S
    Level : 76
    Experience : 118440

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Aknaid
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Primary Magic: Art of Mummification

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    Post by Andr01d Sun May 14, 2017 3:07 pm

    ???


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    Xia Chikai

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    Lineage : Blood Brothers Pact
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 96
    Sacred Shards : 0
    Class : F
    Level : 1
    Experience : 5

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Xia Chikai
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Primary Magic: Astral Magic

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    Post by Xia Chikai Sun May 14, 2017 3:09 pm

    I'll show you how it's supposed to look like.

    Personality: A man and soldier of the shadows. He has become a recluse and a hermit by cutting off any and all connections to the outside world. He talks little so he can listen. He watches those that cannot watch themselves. He is the all seeing eye, living in places long abandoned. He is silent in his movements and makes sure not to disturb. This is how he earned the name "The shadow knight". Darkurr is a person of nobility and honor. He feels strongly to protect the world, yet he picks no side. By this, he is a truly neutral warrior. He has grown old and mysterious upon time. His body has become the shape of his emotions, growing skinny or tall, or fat and short. He always seems to look exactly how he feels. He has been known to have a "fiery" personality. This had been the result of the white flame on his head, that happens to fade into the darkness as Darkurr often does. He has been known to be passionate in war, and takes fights seriously. He believes every little movement can change the world. He is meticulous by doing so, and often is seen as a perfectionist. He is a hard core believer of the butterfly effect... and would often think about the repercussions of every action he takes. He is extremely calculated. However, despite him being a social recluse at times, he has a rather energetic personality and his love of competition; specifically sport fighting and eating. He will eat anything. For the most part, only fights to win, and spares his enemies after defeating them only for them to attack him when his back is turned. His staggering power is simultaneously reined in and enhanced by his fierce loyalty and morality. Darkurr is pure of heart, possessing no negative feelings or thoughts. He is also portrayed to be very innocent as a child, because of growing up alone with no friends or siblings.

    Likes:
    - Quiet
    - Rum
    - Money
    - Ships
    - Singing
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    Son of The Demon of Life || Father of the Demon of Logic

    Lineage : Demon of Time
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 846
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : S
    Level : 76
    Experience : 118440

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Aknaid
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Primary Magic: Art of Mummification

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    Post by Andr01d Sun May 14, 2017 3:14 pm

    "oh ok"

    bump


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    Lineage : Blood Brothers Pact
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 96
    Sacred Shards : 0
    Class : F
    Level : 1
    Experience : 5

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Xia Chikai
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Primary Magic: Astral Magic

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    Post by Xia Chikai Sun May 14, 2017 3:20 pm

    Before I approve this, I want to ask you about your age. What do you mean by 'Timeless'? No one can be immortal. Does he just not have a specified age? Is there a reason he doesn't have a specified age? Is it because he is half-dragon?
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    Lineage : Demon of Time
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 846
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : S
    Level : 76
    Experience : 118440

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Aknaid
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Primary Magic: Art of Mummification

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    Post by Andr01d Sun May 14, 2017 3:21 pm

    "It doesn't say that?"

    bump/


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    Lineage : Blood Brothers Pact
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 96
    Sacred Shards : 0
    Class : F
    Level : 1
    Experience : 5

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Xia Chikai
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Primary Magic: Astral Magic

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    Post by Xia Chikai Sun May 14, 2017 3:24 pm

    Oops sorry. I meant 'Ageless'.

    Before I approve this, I want to ask you about your age. What do you mean by 'Ageless'? No one can be immortal. Does he just not have a specified age? Is there a reason he doesn't have a specified age? Is it because he is half-dragon?
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    Son of The Demon of Life || Father of the Demon of Logic

    Lineage : Demon of Time
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 846
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : S
    Level : 76
    Experience : 118440

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Aknaid
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Primary Magic: Art of Mummification

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    Post by Andr01d Sun May 14, 2017 3:28 pm

    "Does it matter?"


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    Lineage : Blood Brothers Pact
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 96
    Sacred Shards : 0
    Class : F
    Level : 1
    Experience : 5

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Xia Chikai
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Primary Magic: Astral Magic

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    Post by Xia Chikai Sun May 14, 2017 3:30 pm

    It actually does matter. It needs an explanation to be approved. Especially since no one can be sure what you mean by 'Ageless'.
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    Lineage : Demon of Time
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 846
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : S
    Level : 76
    Experience : 118440

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Aknaid
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Primary Magic: Art of Mummification

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    Post by Andr01d Sun May 14, 2017 4:58 pm

    "Whatever."


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    Lineage : Blood Brothers Pact
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 96
    Sacred Shards : 0
    Class : F
    Level : 1
    Experience : 5

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Xia Chikai
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Primary Magic: Astral Magic

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    Post by Xia Chikai Sun May 14, 2017 7:00 pm

    This is one little tiny thing before I approve this. You know if you're half dragon, that you're more vulnerable to Dragon Slayers, and they'll do more damage against you? If you're fine with that, I'll approve this.

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