Let's start with the personality. The personality is supposed to be a minimum of 300 words, please add more onto that. A tip: talk about what your character does in his free time, what he does in battle, and what he is like as a commander or in his village.
For likes you're supposed to have a minimum of three. Add one more and you'll be just fine!
And finally, the height of your character. Your character is way too tall/large. You will either have to go below 6'1" or give a good enough reasoning for your height and then have Neo Stigma, a fellow mod, approve it.
That's all. Thank you!