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    Post by Guest Tue May 23, 2017 4:20 pm

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    Name: Thunder Demon Slayer(Second Generation)
    Type: Lightning/Slayer
    Usage: Conjuration and Manipulation
    Description: Lightning is an electrical discharge caused by imbalances between storm clouds and the ground, or within the clouds themselves. Most lightning occurs within the clouds. As a Demon Slayer, Rin has the unique ability to create lightning from out of thin air as well manipulate existing lightning in close proximity to her location.

    As a child, Rin was adopted by a man named Demyx who happened to be a devil capable of controlling and manipulating lightning. He attempted to teach his daughter his magic however, she seemed to struggle and so, therefore, Demyx implanted a Lightning Demon slayer lacrima inside the young Rin. Making her into a second generation Lightning Demon Slayer

    Demon Slayers are on the light end of the spectrum for slayers and have ability to eat their respective element in it's purest form, as well as when it's mixed in with other elements.

    For lightning slayers in general, they have a versatile arsenal of different types of spells. Not only can Rin deal regular magic damage with offensive spells, defend with defensive spells, but also has the ability to use her lightning to make batteries by charging metal object full of electricity.

    Abilities:
    -Flash Step
    Rin has the ability to teleport in any direction by transforming her body into a bolt of lightning. She is unable to attack in this form, it's simply for dodging attacks and can only be used once per thread at D through B rank. At A rank and higher it can be used a total of three times.
    Distance Chart:

    D Rank: 5 meters
    C Rank: 10 meters
    B Rank: 25 meters
    A Rank: 50 meters
    S Rank: 75 meters
    H Rank: 100 meters
    ? Rank: 115 meters


    -Human Battery Maker
    Rin can gather electromagnetic energy from the air into her body, then focus it into her hands where she’ll be holding a metal object that she’ll charge it full of gathered electricity making a literal battery. She can only make batteries that are the size of a regular C battery at D rank and as she climbs the ranks, she can make even bigger ones. This is utility passive that has no battle purpose.

    -Shock-Proof
    Rin has a natural shock/paralyzing/numbing resistance to lightning and lightning magic.
    Resistance Chart:

    ● 3+ Classes below user : 50% Resistance (+5% Per Class after 3)
    ● 2 Classes below user : 50% Resistance
    ● 1 Class below user : 30% Resistance
    ● Equal Class of user : 25% Resistance
    ● 1 Class Above user : 10% Resistance
    ● 2 Classes Above user : 5% Resistance
    ● 3+ Classes above user : No resistance



    Spells:
    D Rank Spells:
    Thunder Demon's Recharge:
    Name: Thunder Demon’s Recharge
    Rank: D
    Description: This spell allows Rin to replenish her MP if she stays completely still for one post. Rin is covered in a thin layer of electricity that she converted from electrons she gathered from the air into her body.
    MP Replenishment Chart:

    - F-Class : 3% MP
    - D-Class : 5% MP
    - C-Class : 7% MP
    - B-Class : 10% MP
    - A-Class : 15% MP
    - S-Class : 17% MP
    - H-Class : 20% MP
    - X-Class : 25% MP
    - ?-Class : 35% MP
    Strengths:
    +Allows Rin to replenish her MP.
    +Replenishing her MP can help her use her spells more times over

    Weaknesses:
    -Rin MUST stay completely still for one post in order to complete the charge.
    -No other spells can be cast during the duration of this spell.
    -Rin is a sitting duck if this spell is cast in the middle of a battle.

    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts

    Thunder Demon's Discharge:
    Name: Thunder Demon’s Discharge
    Rank: D
    Description: Rin gathers electrons from the air, storing them in her body, then discharges them all at once creating a wave of electricity that bursts out from her body on all sides, capable of not only dealing normal damage but also knocks back opponents 1 meter. The size of the wave is no more than 5 meters in all directions.
    Strengths:
    +Good for fending off multiple attackers
    +Knocks backs anyone who take a direct hit 1 meter

    Weaknesses:
    -Any opponents more than 5 meters away from Rin will not be affected.
    -Can be dodged by jumping back out of the spell’s range
    -Higher ranked opponents will not be knocked back

    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts

    Thunder Demon's Furious Fists:
    Name: Thunder Demon’s Furious Fists
    Rank: D
    Description: Rin charges her fists full of electricity that she gathered from the air and coats over that with a thick layer of lightning that completely covers her fists. This spells main purpose is for close-combat fighting. When Rin’s fists make contact with an opponent, she has the ability to discharge the electricity under the lightning to cause a knock-back effect. Each fist only does ½ of D rank damage.
    Strengths:
    +Puts long range fighters at a disadvantage if drawn into close quarters combat
    +Has a knock-back effect of 1 meter when someone is struck.

    Weaknesses:
    -Fists can easily be dodged.
    -At a disadvantage if opponents are outside her fists’ range.
    - Higher ranked opponents won’t be knocked back.

    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts


    Thunder Demon Shooter:
    Name: Thunder Demon Shooter
    Rank: D
    Description: Rin creates a total of 9 mm bullets out of electricity gathered from the air around her, then coats them in lightning. She holds out her hand, making it into the shape of a gun, firing the bullets from the tip of her index finger. Each bullet does ⅓ of D rank damage. Upon making contact with a target, the lightning deals normal magic damage while the electricity underneath the lightning, will discharge, knocking the target back 1 meter. The bullets can travel up to 10 meters away from Rin at a speed of 5 m/s.
    Strengths:
    -Can knock back opponents hit by bullets, 1 meter.
    -bullets can cause slight bruising upon impact with a target

    Weaknesses:
    -Bullets can be dodged.
    -Higher ranked opponents will not be knocked back.
    -Bullets can be blocked by a defensive spell of equal or higher rank

    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts


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    Thunder Demon Slayer Empty Re: Thunder Demon Slayer

    Post by Kaseki Wed May 24, 2017 8:53 am

    Devil slayer is not real.

    Proof you are a 2nd gen.

    use the correct terms. Users are Class Rated, spells are Rank rated. When you are done, post in the desk,


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    Post by Andr01d Thu May 25, 2017 3:09 pm

    In order to claim second gen slayer, you need to "consume" the lacrima via thread.

    That is the only place where you can "prove" being a slayer. A provide only proves you own a lacrima.




    Static Shock - Provide a chart, or this is not going to get approved.

    Flash Step - You're either teleporting or dashing. If teleporting, I will give you the Chaos-Time element. In addition a chart is needed.

    Shock Proof - Users are class rated, magic is rank rated. Also C/P the chart given, with the provided wording.

    Also keep in mind that a spell can NEVER deal more damage than the rank of the spell. IF it's D-ranked and last 2 posts, it's 1/2 D rank damage a post. The only exception is buffed spells or death element spells. This is either a lightning spell, or a buff (Life element)

    When you edit, bump this thread with proof of being a slayer.


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    Post by Neo Stigma Sun Jun 04, 2017 6:51 pm

    First things first Static shock is a no go, I cannot allow this passive. Having a free stun regardless of rank is broken, especially if it can be triggered by "emotion". Honestly I rarely approve anything tied into a characters "emotion" since it's a free card for a character cash in an ability with minimal cost or consequences.

    Second Flash step, I really don't see this as a passive, with this utility its more fitted as a spell. However I may consider it if you reduce the times you can use it to one, and greatly reduce all of it's range.

    Your last passive is acceptable.

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    Onto spells.

    You may not stun anyone above your rank, you must clarify that in all your spells. Personally I don't allow stuns at such a low rank since you can basically open a can of ass whoppin since you immobilized someone. I will permit stuns if your spell is of a higher rank than an opponent and the stun duration cannot be anything more than one, obviously the duration may be longer ONLY if your spell is effectively of a higher rank and potency of the opponent.

    For your thunder punch thingy it's effectiveness on water mages can only work if the mage is equal or lower your the spells level. Keep in mind higher level players/npcs have stronger resistance to magic regardless the element, so a rank D spell wont do much stronger opponents.

    For your recharge it looks okay to me but please explain the duration of your immobility, are you stuck for one post? If you cant move for one post I'll allow it, but if it's like instant for just a second, then nope not allowing it. Also choose you only get one, it restores your HP or Mp. This spell is like two spells in one, so you can only have HP regen or MP not both.

    For the triangle how high does your character jump? Also you can't knock back anything higher than the spell rank specify that in weakness. No you do not get a two stun, like I said at max you have one post your opponents is stunned, and you can only stun someone equal to this spells level.

    -Can be evaded exiting the triangle's area of effect.
    -Cannot attack outside the lines of the triangle.

    explain this more I'm confused. the opponent can just leave the triangle? And your character can only attack in the triangle? Explain please.

    For your lightning gun thingy, no the stun is not going to be two posts long. You can only stun for one post AND the opponent must be equal or lower than this spells rank. anyone else who's stronger than this spells rank is not getting any stuns.

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    Okay last thoughts.

    Please explain how LESS effective this magic would be against earth spells, you always mention it but you never state a damage, or duration penalty against the earth elements.

    In regards of the stuns, I'll be frank with you don't try any stun abilities until you get up to rank A,maybe be B. Stun locking is not fun for anyone and it's honestly a broken ability REGARDLESS OF ANYONE'S RANK. Its not just stunning freezing is also something I personally look down upon. You can do a shit ton of things with electricity, be creative. You can cause lighting to branch and chain attacks together like a Tesla coil, at bare minim you can reduce movement speed, idk be creative lightning isn't exclusively for stunning. Think really hard about it, because what I'm looking at is pretty broken, it's a whole magic based on stuns and like I said stun locking is a no go in my book.


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