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    Kuraikage

    Lineage : Weather Master
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 1306
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : B
    Level : 27
    Experience : 1275

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Shini Chikai
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Primary Magic: Jutsu

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    Post by Shini Chikai Sat Aug 19, 2017 4:23 pm

    Name: Monkyu
    Type: Combat Pet
    Rank: Strong
    Race: Monkyu
    Personality: Monkyu are creatures that have only recently started to appear on Pandora. They are curious creatures that look like dolls. They wander when unattended but are fierce in battle. They often stare at their masters with tilted heads asking for explanations for everything. Rarely are they seen away from their owner's sides.
    Description: Monkyu Fire 55510

    Name: Fireball
    Rank: D
    Description: Spits a fireball
    Strengths:
    - D-Ranked Damage
    - Damage is considered fire based
    Weaknesses:
    - Any water attack cancels this spell.
    - Mouth has to be open
    - Limited range of 10m
    Duration: Instant (5m/s)
    Cooldown: 3 Post

    Name: Monkyu Kenoshi
    Rank: C
    Description: User gains MP while near Monkyu
    Strengths:
    - Heals C-Ranked magic
    - Passive
    Weaknesses:
    - It can only heal the owner
    - Range of 20m
    - recovery is only at end of post.
    Duration: Passive
    Cooldown: Passive


    Last edited by Shini Chikai on Sat Aug 19, 2017 6:38 pm; edited 3 times in total


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    Position : Queen of Saiyans
    Origin : Kingdom of Kai
    Posts : 518
    Sacred Shards : 41
    Class : B
    Level : 69
    Experience : 61200

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    Post by Mei Sat Aug 19, 2017 5:38 pm

    @Shini Chikai wrote:Name: Monkyu
    Type: Combat Pet
    Rank: Strong
    Race: Monkyu
    Personality: A small little creature that wants to know thigns First, this is misspelled. Second, Personality needs to ve AT LEAST 50 words, please.
    Description: Monkyu Fire 55510

    Name: Fireball
    Rank: D
    Description: Spits a fireball
    Strengths:
    - Deals fire ranked damage It wouldn't deal fire ranked damage. It would deal D Ranked damage because that's the rank of your spell
    - It hurts Considering this is kind of a given, I'll need you to come up with a better strentgh.
    Weaknesses:
    - Any water destroys it I wouldn't exactly word it like this. I would say that "it takes double damage from water" for a more precise weakness.
    - Mouth has to be open
    - It's fire We already know that it's fire. Please come up with a better weakness.
    Duration: H2 posts Please remove this H?
    Cooldown: 1 Post Your cooldown needs to be at least 3 posts for a D Ranked Spell and always greater than your duration.

    Name: Monkyu Kenoshi
    Rank: C
    Description: User gains MP while near Monkyu
    Strengths:
    - Heals Considering this is a C Rank Pet,
    You will have to specify that it only heals 7% MP eveey post.

    - Passive
    Weaknesses:
    - Only owner If you want to put "It can only heal the owner" that would be much appreciated.
    - Ranged The maximum range allowed would be 20 meters. Please specify this.
    - Has a limit Ok? What's the limit?
    Duration: Passive
    Cooldown: Passive

    @Mei


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    Lineage : Weather Master
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 1306
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : B
    Level : 27
    Experience : 1275

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Shini Chikai
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Primary Magic: Jutsu

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    Post by Shini Chikai Sat Aug 19, 2017 5:43 pm

    bump


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    My Name's Olaf! Runs With The Wind Monkyu Fire Empty

    Lineage : Genbu, The Black Tortoise
    Position : Queen of Saiyans
    Origin : Kingdom of Kai
    Posts : 518
    Sacred Shards : 41
    Class : B
    Level : 69
    Experience : 61200

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    Post by Mei Sat Aug 19, 2017 5:48 pm

    @Shini Chikai wrote:Name: Monkyu
    Type: Combat Pet
    Rank: Strong
    Race: Monkyu
    Personality: Monkyu are creatures that have only recently started to appear on Pandora. They are curious creatures that look like dolls. They wander when unattended but are fierce in battle. They often stare at their masters with tilted heads asking for explanations for everything. Rarely are they seen away from their owner's sides.
    Description: Monkyu Fire 55510

    Name: Fireball
    Rank: D
    Description: Spits a fireball
    Strengths:
    - D-Ranked Damage
    - Damage is considered fire based
    Weaknesses:
    - Any water attack canceles this spell.
    - Mouth has to be open
    - Limited range of 5m, This is fine to keep if you want. Just letting you know this can be up to 10 meters if you'd rather.
    Duration: Instant (5m/s)
    Cooldown: 2 Post This has to be at least 3 posts

    Name: Monkyu Kenoshi
    Rank: C
    Description: User gains MP while near Monkyu You need to decide between MP and HP because your first strength states HP while your description says MP.
    Strengths:
    - Heals C-Ranked health
    - Passive
    Weaknesses:
    - It can only heal the owner
    - Range of 20m
    - recovery is only at end of post.
    Duration: Passive
    Cooldown: Passive

    @Mei


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    Kuraikage

    Lineage : Weather Master
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 1306
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : B
    Level : 27
    Experience : 1275

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Shini Chikai
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Primary Magic: Jutsu

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    Post by Shini Chikai Sat Aug 19, 2017 5:50 pm

    bump


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    Mei
    Magikarp VIP

    My Name's Olaf! Runs With The Wind Monkyu Fire Empty

    Lineage : Genbu, The Black Tortoise
    Position : Queen of Saiyans
    Origin : Kingdom of Kai
    Posts : 518
    Sacred Shards : 41
    Class : B
    Level : 69
    Experience : 61200

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    Post by Mei Sat Aug 19, 2017 5:54 pm

    @Shini Chikai wrote:Name: Monkyu
    Type: Combat Pet
    Rank: Strong
    Race: Monkyu
    Personality: Monkyu are creatures that have only recently started to appear on Pandora. They are curious creatures that look like dolls. They wander when unattended but are fierce in battle. They often stare at their masters with tilted heads asking for explanations for everything. Rarely are they seen away from their owner's sides.
    Description: Monkyu Fire 55510

    Name: Fireball
    Rank: D
    Description: Spits a fireball
    Strengths:
    - D-Ranked Damage
    - Damage is considered fire based
    Weaknesses:
    - Any water attack canceles this spell. Ok. This is kinda tedious, but you spelled cancels wrong.
    - Mouth has to be open
    - Limited range of 10m, Same thing except please remove the comma
    Duration: Instant (5m/s)
    Cooldown: 3 Post

    Name: Monkyu Kenoshi
    Rank: C
    Description: User gains MP while near Monkyu
    Strengths:
    - Heals C-Ranked magic
    - Passive
    Weaknesses:
    - It can only heal the owner
    - Range of 20m
    - recovery is only at end of post.
    Duration: Passive
    Cooldown: Passive


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    Shini Chikai
    Shini Chikai
    Luffy VIP

    LET IT BURN! Runs With The Wind Shocking! Monkyu Fire Empty
    Kuraikage

    Lineage : Weather Master
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 1306
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : B
    Level : 27
    Experience : 1275

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Shini Chikai
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Primary Magic: Jutsu

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    Post by Shini Chikai Sat Aug 19, 2017 6:38 pm

    Bump.


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    Mei
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    My Name's Olaf! Runs With The Wind Monkyu Fire Empty

    Lineage : Genbu, The Black Tortoise
    Position : Queen of Saiyans
    Origin : Kingdom of Kai
    Posts : 518
    Sacred Shards : 41
    Class : B
    Level : 69
    Experience : 61200

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    Post by Mei Sat Aug 19, 2017 6:43 pm

    Mei Approves!


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    Monkyu Fire Mei3s-12
    Shini Chikai
    Shini Chikai
    Luffy VIP

    LET IT BURN! Runs With The Wind Shocking! Monkyu Fire Empty
    Kuraikage

    Lineage : Weather Master
    Position : None
    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 1306
    Sacred Shards : 14
    Class : B
    Level : 27
    Experience : 1275

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Shini Chikai
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Primary Magic: Jutsu

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    Post by Shini Chikai Sat Aug 19, 2017 7:08 pm

    Name: Monkyu Kenoshi
    Rank: C
    Description: User gains MP while near Monkyu
    Strengths:
    - Heals C-Ranked magic
    - Passive
    Weaknesses:
    - It can only heal the owner
    - Range of 20m
    - recovery is only at end of post.
    Duration: Passive
    Cooldown: Passive
    This is the largest and only issue.

    The range is double of what is allowed.

    The passive is a 20m distance, from the pet, this is a 40m radius. Max range should be 10m.

    other than this, this app is perfect.


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