@Shini Chikai wrote:Name:
Monkyu are creatures that have only recently started to appear on Pandora. They are curious creatures that look like dolls. They wander when unattanded but are firce in battle. This is only 29 words. You need AT LEAST 50. Also, you spelled fierce wrong.Description:
A small creature that looks like a dall What's a dall?
. It stands no more than a foot tol What is tol?
. It comes in many colors What color is THIS one though? You can keep this sentence, but you need to be specific to your pet.
. When it's hit it makes a sqeak sound like a chew toy.Name:
Bites down with teach under itself. Uhm.. What?Strengths:
- Deals ice elemental damage It deals D Ranked damage
- It hurts This is a given, so could you please change this?Weaknesses:
- no range If it has no range, you could say the range is self.
- Mouth has to be open
- Doesn't damage any earth defences Duration:
H2 posts Erase the H please?"Cooldown:
1 Post Cooldown minimum is 3 postsName:
User gains HP while near MonkyuStrengths:
- Heals Considering this is a C Rank Pet,
You will have to specify that it only heals 7% HP eveey post.
- Only owner If you want to put "It can only heal the owner" that would be much appreciated.
- Ranged The maximum range allowed would be 20 meters. Please specify this.
- Has a limit Ok? What's the limit?Duration: