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    Post by PhoenixRises101 Mon May 22, 2017 6:55 pm

    Hello there! My name's Sonya and I'll be grading your application today. Before starting, though, I will need you to link proof of your weapon obtainment/purchase. This is due to the fact that the item is linked as 'Mythic.' Only then will I be able to fully grade this.

    Once you have the link inserted, please bump and I will get to this asap. Thank you!~


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    Post by Shini Chikai Mon May 22, 2017 6:57 pm

    bump


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    Post by PhoenixRises101 Mon May 22, 2017 7:20 pm

    Perfect! Now for the grading:

    1. As I can currently see, the template seems a bit off. Please add in the missing portion [owner]. This will tell us who the weapon belongs to. Furthermore, please remove 'Dual Excalibur' from the "Type:" portion and insert 'Weapon' in its place instead. The weapon template will be listed in the spoiler for reference as well.
    Template Reference:

    Code:
    [b]Name:[/b] (What is it called?)
    [b]Owner:[/b] (Who does it belong to? [Names of main characters only, no companions.])
    [b]Type:[/b] (Armor, Weapon, or other?)
    [b]Rank:[/b] (Weak, Strong, Legendary or Sacred?)
    [b]Description:[/b] (A short description and an image if possible.)
    [b]Length:[/b] (How long is it? [WEAPONS ONLY]
    [b]Weight:[/b] (How heavy is it?)
    [b]Strengths:[/b] (Please list minimum of 2)
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    [b]Weaknesses:[/b] (You must have one more weakness than strengths)
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    [b]Ability:[/b] (What special thing can your weapon do? [NOTE: Weak items get no abilities)

    2. On to the weapon itself, I will also need a small paragraph explaining your weapon description. This will also be used for reference in case the link goes bad or if you wish to change its color, etc. Please be as descriptive as possible as well.

    3. Unfortunately, as this is a weak weapon, no special abilities will be given. Please remove it and insert 'N/A' in its place. Furthermore, please remove 'Cannot be broken' from strengths as a weak weapon/item can easily be broken. Please add another strength in its place.

    If you have any questions, feel free to post here and/or refer to the Guide for more details. Bump when done~


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    Post by Shini Chikai Mon May 22, 2017 7:45 pm

    bump


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    Post by PhoenixRises101 Mon May 22, 2017 8:30 pm

    Hello! I believed you missed a few things mentioned in the previous grading post:

    1. You will need to add in the 'Owner' portion of the template. This is so that we know who the item, in this case, weapon belongs to. Without that, we won't be able to finalize the approval of this application. Please refer to the previous grading post for more information.

    2. I will need you to add in more description concerning the swords. If you need more to say, please consider adding the design of the sword as well as any special characteristics about it. In other words, pretend the picture doesn't exist and go from there.

    3. Strengths, I still need you to remove the second one as it is another version of the 'cannot be broken.' Feel free to add it's opposite, though, as it complies with rules.

    4. Height/Weight, I looked for the average weight of swords and they were about 5 pounds (medieval swords were 50 pounds) so, um.. do you want to change the weight or leave it 25 pounds each? Keep in mind that the swords are about 3 feet in length each.

    5. I will need you to add the amount of damage that the weapon can cause as well as how many hits it can take before being rendered useless and/or broken.


    Bump when done~


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    Post by Shini Chikai Thu May 25, 2017 3:23 pm

    "Where HP?"


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    Post by PhoenixRises101 Sat May 27, 2017 7:05 pm

    Alrighty then. I will need you to add another strength to the weapon as well as specify the damage it causes. Per example, it could be that 0.2 D rank damage per slash. I will also need you to add the weapon's durability. This would tell us how much damage it can take before breaking apart. And, yo give you a visual on 2 feet, imagine four dollar bills stacked on a straight line. That how tall these weapons are. If you're fine, we can proceed once the above is done ^-^


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    Class : B
    Level : 27
    Experience : 1275

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Shini Chikai
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Primary Magic: Jutsu

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    Post by Shini Chikai Sat May 27, 2017 8:39 pm

    "uhm ok"


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    Post by PhoenixRises101 Sat Jun 03, 2017 1:11 pm

    Alrighty then, I noticed you skipped over one of the aforementioned items so I'll need you to add an extra strength.

    -The weight of the sword can prove to be a burden to the owner in terms of mobility.
    - The weapon is weak still, meaning it is only suitable to use when up against F, D and C rank opponent


    Seeing as the sword is now only 5lbs., the weight shouldn't prove to be a problem to the user. So you would need to change that. Also, please remove the second weakness mentioned. Once that one has been removed, no need to add another as the weaknesses correlate with the strength to weakness ratio.

    Once done, feel free to bump~



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    Origin : Ninja Town
    Posts : 1299
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    Class : B
    Level : 27
    Experience : 1275

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Shini Chikai
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Primary Magic: Jutsu

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    Post by Shini Chikai Sat Jun 03, 2017 5:09 pm

    bump


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