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    Post by Kodai on Thu Mar 29, 2018 11:37 pm

    - Can stun enemies with her shield
    Denied, only Lightning can do this.

    - Underbelly weakness (Takes 2x damage when hit)
    This is already stated in your ability. PLease add another.

    "She can manipulate her shield in any position, as long as it is in melee range of her."
    Lolno. A defensive barrier is static and does not move, unless it is held.

    - Follows Mirage wherever she goes
    - Can block from multiple angles around Mirage
    Denied.

    Cooldown: 2 posts (+1 per use) after being destroyed.
    Cooldown occurs after the spell is completed. What is all of this?

    Double-edged - Denied. Upon further review, this is improperly balanced, as well as makes no sense. To deal more damage to a certain user-type, is a psudeo Slayer type ability. To deal damge to an element makes no sense. as well as to take damage from a healing spell... makes less sense.

    Build-a-web - Denied. You already have an ability without a cost.


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    Post by Sly on Fri Mar 30, 2018 12:16 am

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    Post by Kodai on Sat Mar 31, 2018 5:07 am

    Guardian - Reword this, simplify it. "All attacks deal X but . . . " You get the picture.

    It's durability is equivalent to a strong-ranked shield (25 weak hits/ 10D spells).
    Denied. Where are you getting this crazy defense number from?
    10D = 5C.

    Why does this have 5C defense? Why is an upkeep cost if your ability negets that? There's useless info in this.

    Nimble - Why is death allowing you to get more attack? While this ability is barely within reason, it makes no sense considering the element.

    Ranged weapon One-trick - Denied. reload time cannot be altered.
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    Post by Sly on Sat Mar 31, 2018 5:42 am

    Bump ;3;
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    Post by Kodai on Sun Apr 08, 2018 8:46 am

    Mirage - As a wolf, I also want length, nose to tail, with tail length.Can she speak?
    Guardian - Weakness goes last
    Mirage's Shield - Range? is this right in front of the caster?

    Pulse :
    Nimble - Ye that fine I guess
    Poison - If you can only do damage with weapons.. . . . how would this work?
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    Post by Sly on Mon Apr 09, 2018 10:03 pm

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