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    Elemental Golem Creation

    Lilinette Q. Mido
    Lilinette Q. Mido
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    Lineage : Strength of The Abyss
    Position : None
    Origin : Urban City
    Posts : 994
    Sacred Shards : 1
    Class : B
    Level : 25
    Experience : 1100

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Lilinette Q. Mido
    Alignment: Neutral
    Primary Magic: Elemental golem creation

    Elemental Golem Creation  Empty Elemental Golem Creation

    Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Sun Nov 09, 2014 5:00 pm

    Name: Elemental Golem Creation
    Type: Varies depending on Golem Made
    Usage: Creation
    Description: Elemental Golem Creation is a form of Alchemy, which although a person can be born with the ability to use such alchemy, it must also be studied. Lilinette discovered she was born with the ability to use such a powerful form of alchemy when she was 13 years old, and she was left in an ally to die. It was then that the Golem creation magic within her would not allow her to die, and fused her body with the shadows. Allowing her to not only use her alchemy, but also allow her to live. Forever. 

    Elemental Golem creation allows the user, in this case Lilinette, to fuse animals, such as cats, dogs, people, with an element of their choice. The golem is then partially that element, and can bend that element to the best of their abilities.  This golem is also bound to its creator, meaning that it must always obey their rules. Once made, a golem remains inactive in a location chosen by their master. Once the master needs them, the golem will activate and spontaneously appear in front of their master, ready to do as they are told. The golems, however, can be killed. Once killed, the user has to create a new one to take its place.
    Abilities:
    - Golem Combustion: Golem Combustion is considered the taboo of Golem creation alchemy.  when needed, the user can destroy their golem, no matter the element, into a nonelemental explosion causing damage equal to the rank of the golem destroyed, and in the range allowed for the golems rank. Of course, this completely destroys the golem, not allowing for it to be used again. This is often used as a last resort, distracting the opponent so the master can escape. The user must sacrifice magic equal to half the mana cost of the golem in order to activate this ability.

    Spells:
    D-rank Golems:

    Mizu Josei:

    Name: Mizu Josei
    Rank: D
    Element: Ice
    Height: 5'8
    Weight: 146 pounds
    Hair: Red
    Eyes: Blue
    Appearance:
    Mizu Josei:
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    Personality: She Used to be a very dominating golem. She loves to fight, but she hates to take orders. She will typically tell Lilinette that she is fighting for the fun of it, not because Lilinette told her too. Lilinette lets it slide sense Mizu is forced to listen to her masters orders anyways. However, ever sense the death of her sister, she has nothing left to hold her onto reality. Making her Lilinettes forever faithful slave.
    Weapon: Fists
    History: Kasai and her twin sister, Mizu, were children of a very noble family which decided it was a good idea to build a house right next to Lilinettes. Liking her solidarity and exclusion from the public, Lilinette, along with Kirāgādo  and Asikiho, went over to the house and tore it down, murdering The father and mother  were going to live there at the time, and were unlucky enough to be looking around the unfinished house by the time Lilinette had shown up. It was the day after that Mizu and Kasai went to visit the house. Lilinette was tempted to kill them, but she realized they were in tip top physical state, so, she kidnapped them. She then kept them in her basement for a few days, just before turning them both into golems. In an attempt to get Mizu to be respectful, she killed her weaker sister. Kasai.
    Hp: the equivalent to 1 C-rank hit.
    Ability: Frost Bod- Mizu has a body made of ice, and any water she touches (that is either not magical or is of D-rank or lower) will be turned to ice. 
    Strengths:
    - She can freeze up to 2 gallons of water.
    - She is very strong against water magic and grass/nature magic. 
    Weaknesses:
    - She is weak against metal magic, and fire magic.
    - If she is hit by a Fire spell of B-rank or higher, or the equivalent of such, she will be permanently destroyed.
    - She is weak against rock magic
    ~ No long ranged advantage.
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts 
    Hiro:
    Name: Hiro
    Rank: D
    Element: Fire
    Height: 5'8"
    Weight: 145 pounds
    Hair: Red
    Eyes: Red
    Appearance:
    Hiro:
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    Personality: Hiro is a very impatient Golem. He constantly seeks attention, and stops at nothing to prove that he is the best, despite being one of Lilinettes weaker golems.
    Weapon: Duel Blades. (1 is 5 feet long, the other is 3'9" long"
    History: Hiro was created as a replacment for Kasai, Mizu's sister, after Lilinette destroyed her in order to get mizu to finally become a real golem, and loose grip with her humanity. Hiro was the second lieutenant of the assassins guild run by Rokku, which Lilinette saw potential in. So, along with taking Rokku, she took Hiro and decided to turn him into a golem as well. Just to spike him, she turned the man who was doing his job for justice and what was light in the world, and fused him with shadows, of all things. 
    Hp: the equivalent to 1 C-rank hit.
    Ability: Hephaestus's Unfinished Blade- Hiro's can create fire from the palms of his hand, and use it to set things on fire. He most typically uses this to set his swords on fire, causing D-rank damage, along with slight, first degree burns.
    Strengths:
    - Good against grass, forest, and ice magic
    -  Good for both mid-ranged and melee combat.
    Weaknesses:
    - Water magic
    - The fire can only reach about 5 meters away from Hiro, making him not very effective in long ranged combat. (using a tool)
    - Not very fast due to the swords.
    ~ Not very effective in long ranged combat.
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts 
    Khione :
    Name: Khione
    Rank: D
    Element: Ice
    Height: 5'8"
    Weight: 145 pounds
    Hair: Black
    Eyes: Dark Blue
    Appearance:
    Hiro:
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    Personality: Khione is a very... sinister summon. She loves torturing people, part of the reason why she is in Lilinettes collection. Khione is the one that Lilinette calls upon when she doesn't want to get her hands dirty interrogating the weak. Khione is constantly giving off an eerie smile, almost to go along with her almost constant eerie aura.
    Weapon: Hair
    History: Khione was in charge of a small branch of the Agency. She was known as the ice queen, mainly because she showed no respect for her employees, and sometimes would kill them simply when she was bored. Lilinette put a stop to this, and was going to kill her. However, she sensed not only power, but respect for this women. And decided to add her to the "team", so to speak.
    Hp: the equivalent to 1 D-rank hit.
    Ability: Vanity of the Ice Goddess- Khione has the ability to manipulate her hair, stretching it up to 3 meters out, and using it to whip her opponents. Being an ice golem, her hair has ice crystals in it, causing small, D-ranked cuts and bruises, along with minor frost bite. (less then first degree). This hair, however, can be cut, and will not regrow for the rest of that thread.
    Strengths:
    - Good against grass and forest magic
    - Good at mid ranged and melee combat. 
    Weaknesses:
    - Fire magic
    - Other than her hair, she is physically weak. 
    - Weak defense.
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts 
    Zues:
    Name: Zues
    Rank: D
    Element: Electric 
    Height: 14 feet wide (wing span), 4 feet high (when horizontal), 7 feet long (or 8 feet tall when on its back legs).
    Weight: 300 pounds
    Hair: green
    Eyes: purples
    Appearance:
    Zues:
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    Personality: Zues has no personality to speak of. He has no emotions, and only does what he is told. He is less of a summon, and more of a machine. He has no real thought process, only what Lilinette tells him to do.
    Weapon: N/A
    History: Lilinette realized that their had to be a way to get around that was more efficient then what she already was doing. So, combining wind and electricity, she created Zues. A fast, feathered friend.
    Hp: the equivalent to 1 D-rank hit.
    Ability: Zues's Range- Zues can fly up to 25 meters above ground level, and go up to 20 mps.
    Strengths:
    - Can carry up to  3 people on his back.
    - flies up to 25 meters above sea level at speeds of 20 mps, and can manipulate the air around its riders so that they have a constant supply of oxygen.
    Weaknesses:
    - Has no fighting ability.
    - Can be taken out by a single D-rank hit (is weaker then the typical Golem)
    - Has no defensive qualities and yet is huge (is kind of a giant target)
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts 

    C-rank Golems:
    Rokku:

    Name: Rokku
    Rank: C
    Element: Shadow
    Height: 5'10"
    Weight: 168 pounds
    Hair: Blonde
    Eyes: Blue
    Appearance:
    Rokku:
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    Personality: No one knows his personality. Due to his face being completely destroyed and covered with a mask, he can not speak, or make noticeable facial expressions.
    Weapon: Twin Pistols
    History: Rokku, whose real name is unknown to Lilinette, attempted to assassinate Lilinette as he was a member of a bounty hunters guild. Of course, his team and himself were no match for Lilinette, and after seeing how he was almost a no miss gunsman, she took him as one of her golems.
    Hp: the equivalent to 1 B-rank hit.
    Ability: Shadows Reload- Rokku's guns never run out of bullets, for they are constantly being refilled by shadows. These bullets travel up to 25 meters per second, and up to 30 meters away. 
    Strengths:
    ~ Long Ranged Attacks
    ~ Strong against Light
    Weaknesses:
    ~ Is weak in close ranged combat
    ~ his bullets, even though are made of shadows, are just bullets, and can only fly straight and can only be fired once per post.
    ~ Rokku himself is not very fast.
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 6 posts 
    Kirāgādo:
    Name: Kirāgādo
    Rank: C
    Element: Lightning
    Height: 5'8"
    Weight: 134 pounds
    Hair: Dark Grey
    Eyes: Hazel
    Appearance:
    Kirāgādo:
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    Personality: Althought Golems are supposed to be very obedient, Kirāgādo is more obedient than most. He never speaks at all, let alone talks back to his master. He is constantly doing as he is told, and always have an emotionless aura around himself.
    Weapon: Katana
    History: Ever sense Kirāgādo was a child, he was trained to become a master assassin. He was top of his class, and predicted to become one of the most successful of his clan. However, when time came for Kirāgādo to shine, he froze. He knew what to do, but one thing stopped him. His conscious. Kirāgādo's parents were so ashamed that his father, being the leader of the clan, sold him to slavery and told the clan that he had died in battle rather then had returned a failure. Of course, no one wanted to buy Kirāgādo. At least, not right away. No one wanted a slave that would kill when told to kill, or harm when told to harm. Of course, Lilinette knew how to fix that problem. Buying him right off the bat, Lilinettte took his straight to the dungeon, and infused him with wind. Turning him into an elemental wind golem. Now his conscious tells him one thing, please Lilinette. And that in no way prevents him from killing. Of course, Lilinette has realized one thing, with her current magical capacity where it is, she is unable to use Kirāgādo to his full potential. Meaning they both have a lot of training to do. After some careful reconsideration, Lilinette decided that It was time. She needed him faster, stronger. So, using alchemy, she turned him into a lightning golem. Replacing all of his wind molecules, with that of electricity. 
    Hp: the equivalent to 1 B-rank hit.
    Ability: Ninjas Breath- Kirāgādo has enhanced speed thanks to the wind and lightning infused in his body, allowing for him to run up to 30 miles per hour.
    Strengths:
    - Very high intelligence about the human body, meaning he knows all of its weak points.  
    - Extremely fast. He can run up to 20 to 30 mph.
    Weaknesses:
    - Being a wind elemental, he is weakened by ground/earth magic.
    - He relies almost entirely on his speed and mobility, meaning that uneven ground, or shaking terrain, will put him at a grave disadvantage.
    - Despite being an elemental, Kirāgādo can not use any real form of magic.
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 6 posts
    Leena:
    Name: Leena
    Rank: C
    Element: Lighting/Electricity
    Height: 5'9"
    Weight: 200 pounds
    Hair: Pink
    Eyes: Hazel
    Appearance:
    Leena:
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    Personality: Leena is a cocky young lady. She doesn't speak much, thanks to Lilinette getting annoyed with her back before she was turned into a golem and removing her vocal cords. However, her constant facial expressions just read off as fairly cocky.
    Weapon: Electric Fists
    History: Leena was one of the head developers of the agency. She was trying to create electronic fists, something that would allow its wearer to sends an unimaginable amount of voltage through their opponent with a single hit. It was a good project, and over all, Leena was a good worker. Well, all except for when Lilinette was told by one of the lower ranking members that there was evidence to show that she was plotting to start her own little business, one against the Agency. In the fight between Leena and Lilinette, Lilinette found that they were almost equal opponents. She would not be able to kill Leena fairly, so she chopped off the poor girls arms. Wondering if she could make use of this, Lilinette fused Leena's body with electricity and metal, and fused her arms with her electronic fists, turning her into Lilinetts first Electric Golem. 
    Hp: The equivalent to 1 B-rank attack.
    Ability: Lightnings Fists of Fury: Each time she throws a punch, a D-ranked shock of electricity is emitted from her fist. 
    Strengths:
    - Very high intelligence.
    - Each hit causes D-rank damage and electrocutes the opponent. (It is electricity, making it very powerful, and dangerous, in water)
    - Once per thread, she can shoot out a blast of C-rank lightning towards a single target.
    Weaknesses:
    - Despite being an electric Golem, due to the weight the cuffs put on her, she isn't very fast. She can only move at around 10 mps max.
    - Leena will electrocute anything she touches without intent, meaning that she can't exactly give an ally a pat on the back.
    - If her gauntlets get directly wet, it can cause them to electrocute Leena herself.
    - Her blasts are attracted towards metal (like most electricity)
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 6 posts


    Last edited by Lilinette Q. Mido on Thu Nov 27, 2014 8:36 pm; edited 22 times in total


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    Kaseki
    Kaseki
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    Lineage : Gift of The Lion Turtle
    Position : None
    Origin : Pandora
    Posts : 4899
    Sacred Shards :
    Class : Ω
    Level :
    Experience :

    Character Sheet
    Character Name: Kaseki / Kodai
    Alignment: Lawful Neutral
    Primary Magic: Gift of The Lion Turtle

    Elemental Golem Creation  Empty Re: Elemental Golem Creation

    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 27, 2014 1:41 pm

    Before I continue... This magic is FULL of information. It's rather... well, for lack of a better word, overwhelming to grade. So, bear with me on my edits... as I'm trying to look at every single part at once.

    @Lilinette Q. Mido wrote:Name: Elemental Golem Creation
    Type: Varies depending on Golem Made
    Usage: Creation
    Description: Elemental Golem Creation is a form of Alchemy, which although a person can be born with the ability to use such alchemy, it must also be studied. Lilinette discovered she was born with the ability to use such a powerful form of alchemy when she was 13 years old, and she was left in an ally to die. It was then that the Golem creation magic within her would not allow her to die, and fused her body with the shadows. Allowing her to not only use her alchemy, but also allow her to live. Forever.

    Elemental Golem creation allows the user, in this case Lilinette, to fuse animals, such as cats, dogs, people, with an element of their choice. The golem is then partially that element, and can bend that element to the best of their abilities.  This golem is also bound to its creator, meaning that it must always obey their rules. The golems, however, can be killed. Once killed, the user has to create a new one to take its place.
    Abilities:
    - Eternal Life: Due to Lilinettes body sustaining off of alchemy, she can not age, and can not die naturally. She can die by unnatural means of course, such as being stabbed through the heart, decapitation, ect. After some thought... This is going to be removed from your magic.
    - Golem Transportation: Once main, a golem remains inactive in a location chosen by their master. Once the master needs them, the golem will activate and spontaneously appear in front of their master, ready to do as they are told. This will need to be removed from abilities as well.
    - Golem Combustion: Golem Combustion is considered the taboo of Golem creation alchemy.  when needed, the user can destroy their golem, no matter the element, into a nonelemental explosion causing damage equal to the rank of the golem destroyed, and in the range allowed for the golems rank. Of course, this completely destroys the golem, not allowing for it to be used again. This is often used as a last resort, distracting the opponent so the master can escape. The user must sacrifice magic equal to half the mana cost of the golem in order to activate this ability.
    - Golem Sight: Lilinette can link with her golems, seeing and hearing anything they can see or hear no matter how far away they are, and still retain the ability to see through her own eyes as well.
    - MultiSummon: Lilinette can summon 2 golems at once. This too, will be removed.

    Now, before you panic, let me explain.
    What is highlighted in blue, will be removed completely from this magic. This will be instead added into your character app. These are things that barely pertain to your magic, and shouldn't be here. This will free up some ability slots, allowing you to do some more things with your golems. What is highlighted in green will be removed and added into your Spell information. In simple sense, your golems... I'm going to treat like Celestial Spirits, ReEquip Weapons, and Pokemon. As they are all summoned from "another dimension", are equiped with assorted weapons, and have a mind of their own.. to an extent.

    NOTE: MultiSummon: I want you to make a chart, on how many golems you can control at each class. EX:

    Class F: 1 Golems
    Class D: 1 Golems
    Class C: 2 Golems
    Class B: 2 Golems..

    And so on. This, I will add to your character personally.


    Spells:
    D-rank Golems:

    Mizu Josei:

    Name: Mizu Josei
    Rank: D
    Element: Ice
    Height: 5'8
    Weight: 146 pounds
    Hair: Red
    Eyes: Blue
    Appearance:
    Mizu Josei:
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    Personality: She Used to be a very dominating golem. She loves to fight, but she hates to take orders. She will typically tell Lilinette that she is fighting for the fun of it, not because Lilinette told her too. Lilinette lets it slide sense Mizu is forced to listen to her masters orders anyways. However, ever sense the death of her sister, she has nothing left to hold her onto reality. Making her Lilinettes forever faithful slave.
    Weapon: Fists
    History: Kasai and her twin sister, Mizu, were children of a very noble family which decided it was a good idea to build a house right next to Lilinettes. Liking her solidarity and exclusion from the public, Lilinette, along with Kirāgādo  and Asikiho, went over to the house and tore it down, murdering The father and mother  were going to live there at the time, and were unlucky enough to be looking around the unfinished house by the time Lilinette had shown up. It was the day after that Mizu and Kasai went to visit the house. Lilinette was tempted to kill them, but she realized they were in tip top physical state, so, she kidnapped them. She then kept them in her basement for a few days, just before turning them both into golems. In an attempt to get Mizu to be respectful, she killed her weaker sister. Kasai.
    Hp: the equivalent to 1 C-rank hit.
    Ability: Frost Body- Mizu has a body made of ice, and any water she touches (that is either not magical or is of D-rank or lower) will be turned to ice. 
    Strengths:
    - Her body is made of ice, and any water she touches turns to ice as well.  This has been stated. So you'll need to come up with something else. Such as... can freeze up to 2 gallons per post.
    - She is very strong against water magic and grass/nature magic. 
    Weaknesses:
    - She is weak against metal magic, and fire magic.
    - If she is hit by a Fire spell of B-rank or higher, or the equivalent of such, she will be permanently destroyed.
    - She is weak against ground magic What is ground? Earth?
    ~ No long ranged advantage.
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts (unless destroyed sooner, or if destroyed completely he can never come back) I will state this once, and it will follow to the rest of the golems... Remove this, and state this in the magic. It makes this all easier to read and understand it better.
    Hiro:
    Name: Hiro
    Rank: D
    Element: Fire
    Height: 5'8"
    Weight: 145 pounds
    Hair: Red
    Eyes: Red
    Appearance:
    Hiro:
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    Personality: Hiro is a very impatient Golem. He constantly seeks attention, and stops at nothing to prove that he is the best, despite being one of Lilinettes weaker golems.
    Weapon: Duel Blades
    History: Hiro was created as a replacment for Kasai, Mizu's sister, after Lilinette destroyed her in order to get mizu to finally become a real golem, and loose grip with her humanity. Hiro was the second lieutenant of the assassins guild run by Rokku, which Lilinette saw potential in. So, along with taking Rokku, she took Hiro and decided to turn him into a golem as well. Just to spike him, she turned the man who was doing his job for justice and what was light in the world, and fused him with shadows, of all things. 
    Hp: the equivalent to 1 C-rank hit.
    Ability: Hephaestus's Unfinished Blade- Hiro's blade can catch on fire, and be used to make slashed towards the opponent. These slashes can reach up to 5 meters away and cause D-rank damage, along with slight, first degree burns. Range: Contact. Can't deal more than D-rank damage per post. HOWEVER... if you wrote this so that his hands catch fire, and whatever he holds deals Fire damage... this would be graded differently. *NudgeNudge*
    Strengths:
    - Good against grass, forest, and ice magic
    -  Good for both mid-ranged and melee combat.
    Weaknesses:
    - Water magic
    - The fire can only reach about 5 meters away from Hiro, making him not very effective in long ranged combat.
    - Not very fast due to the two, great swords. Greatswords? No. That's insane.... You need measurements on these weapons. All I knew before reading this was he had two blades.
    ~ Not very effective in long ranged combat.
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts (unless destroyed sooner, or if destroyed completely he can never come back)
    Khione :
    Name: Khione
    Rank: D
    Element: Ice
    Height: 5'8"
    Weight: 145 pounds
    Hair: Black
    Eyes: Dark Blue
    Appearance:
    Hiro:
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    Personality: Khione is a very... sinister summon. She loves torturing people, part of the reason why she is in Lilinettes collection. Khione is the one that Lilinette calls upon when she doesn't want to get her hands dirty interrogating the weak. Khione is constantly giving off an eerie smile, almost to go along with her almost constant eerie aura.
    Weapon: Hair
    History: Khione was in charge of a small branch of the Agency. She was known as the ice queen, mainly because she showed no respect for her employees, and sometimes would kill them simply when she was bored. Lilinette put a stop to this, and was going to kill her. However, she sensed not only power, but respect for this women. And decided to add her to the "team", so to speak.
    Hp: the equivalent to 1 D-rank hit.
    Ability: Vanity of the Ice Goddess- Khione has the ability to manipulate her hair, stretching it up to 5 meters out, and using it to whip her opponents. Being an ice golem, her hair has ice crystals in it, causing small, D-ranked cuts and bruises, along with minor frost bite. (less then first degree). This hair, however, can be cut, and will not regrow for the rest of that thread.
    Strengths:
    - Good against grass and forest magic
    - Good at mid ranged and melee combat. 
    Weaknesses:
    - Fire magic
    - Other than her hair, she is physically weak. 
    - Weak defense.
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts (unless destroyed sooner, or if destroyed completely he can never come back)
    Zues:
    Name: Zues
    Rank: D
    Element: Electric 
    Height: 14 feet wide (wing span), 4 feet high (when horizontal), 7 feet long (or 8 feet tall when on its back legs).
    Weight: 300 pounds
    Hair: green
    Eyes: purples
    Appearance:
    Zues:
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    Personality: Zues has no personality to speak of. He has no emotions, and only does what he is told. He is less of a summon, and more of a machine. He has no real thought process, only what Lilinette tells him to do.
    Weapon: N/A
    History: Lilinette realized that their had to be a way to get around that was more efficient then what she already was doing. So, combining wind and electricity, she created Zues. A fast, feathered friend.
    Hp: the equivalent to 1 D-rank hit.
    Ability: Zues's Range- Zues can fly up to 25 meters above ground level, and go up to 20 mps.
    Strengths:
    - Can carry up to  3 people on his back.
    - flies up to 25 meters above sea level at speeds of 20 mps, and can manipulate the air around its riders so that they have a constant supply of oxygen.
    Weaknesses:
    - Has no fighting ability.
    - Can be taken out by a single D-rank hit (is weaker then the typical Golem)
    - Has no defensive qualities and yet is huge (is kind of a giant target)
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts (unless destroyed sooner, or if destroyed completely he can never come back)

    C-rank Golems:
    Rokku:

    Name: Rokku
    Rank: C
    Element: Shadow
    Height: 5'10"
    Weight: 168 pounds
    Hair: Blonde
    Eyes: Blue
    Appearance:
    Rokku:
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    Personality: No one knows his personality. Due to his face being completely destroyed and covered with a mask, he can not speak, or make noticeable facial expressions.
    Weapon: Twin Pistols
    History: Rokku, whose real name is unknown to Lilinette, attempted to assassinate Lilinette as he was a member of a bounty hunters guild. Of course, his team and himself were no match for Lilinette, and after seeing how he was almost a no miss gunsman, she took him as one of her golems.
    Hp: the equivalent to 1 B-rank hit.
    Ability: Shadows Reload- Rokku's guns never run out of bullets, for they are constantly being refilled by shadows. These bullets travel up to 25 meters per second, and up to 60 meters away. 
    Strengths:
    ~ Long Ranged Attacks
    ~ Strong against Light
    Weaknesses:
    ~ Is weak in close ranged combat
    ~ his bullets, even though are made of shadows, are just bullets, and can only fly straight.
    ~ Rokku himself is not very fast.
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown:  6 posts (unless destroyed sooner, or if destroyed completely he can never come back)
    Kirāgādo:
    Name: Kirāgādo
    Rank: C
    Element: Lightning
    Height: 5'8"
    Weight: 134 pounds
    Hair: Dark Grey
    Eyes: Hazel
    Appearance:
    Kirāgādo:
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    Personality: Althought Golems are supposed to be very obedient, Kirāgādo is more obedient than most. He never speaks at all, let alone talks back to his master. He is constantly doing as he is told, and always have an emotionless aura around himself.
    Weapon: Katana
    History: Ever sense Kirāgādo was a child, he was trained to become a master assassin. He was top of his class, and predicted to become one of the most successful of his clan. However, when time came for Kirāgādo to shine, he froze. He knew what to do, but one thing stopped him. His conscious. Kirāgādo's parents were so ashamed that his father, being the leader of the clan, sold him to slavery and told the clan that he had died in battle rather then had returned a failure. Of course, no one wanted to buy Kirāgādo. At least, not right away. No one wanted a slave that would kill when told to kill, or harm when told to harm. Of course, Lilinette knew how to fix that problem. Buying him right off the bat, Lilinettte took his straight to the dungeon, and infused him with wind. Turning him into an elemental wind golem. Now his conscious tells him one thing, please Lilinette. And that in no way prevents him from killing. Of course, Lilinette has realized one thing, with her current magical capacity where it is, she is unable to use Kirāgādo to his full potential. Meaning they both have a lot of training to do. After some careful reconsideration, Lilinette decided that It was time. She needed him faster, stronger. So, using alchemy, she turned him into a lightning golem. Replacing all of his wind molecules, with that of electricity. 
    Hp: the equivalent to 1 B-rank hit.
    Ability: Ninjas Breath- Kirāgādo has enhanced speed thanks to the wind and lightning infused in his body, allowing for him to run up to 30 miles per hour.
    Strengths:
    - Very high intelligence about the human body, meaning he knows all of its weak points.  
    - Extremely fast. He can run up to 20 to 30 mph.
    Weaknesses:
    - Being a wind elemental, he is weakened by ground/earth magic.
    - He relies almost entirely on his speed and mobility, meaning that uneven ground, or shaking terrain, will put him at a grave disadvantage.
    - Despite being an elemental, Kirāgādo can not use any real form of magic.
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 6 posts (unless destroyed sooner, or if destroyed completely he can never come back)
    Leena:
    Name: Leena
    Rank: C
    Element: Lighting/Electricity
    Height: 5'9"
    Weight: 200 pounds
    Hair: Pink
    Eyes: Hazel
    Appearance:
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    Personality: Leena is a cocky young lady. She doesn't speak much, thanks to Lilinette getting annoyed with her back before she was turned into a golem and removing her vocal cords. However, her constant facial expressions just read off as fairly cocky.
    Weapon: Electric Fists
    History: Leena was one of the head developers of the agency. She was trying to create electronic fists, something that would allow its wearer to sends an unimaginable amount of voltage through their opponent with a single hit. It was a good project, and over all, Leena was a good worker. Well, all except for when Lilinette was told by one of the lower ranking members that there was evidence to show that she was plotting to start her own little business, one against the Agency. In the fight between Leena and Lilinette, Lilinette found that they were almost equal opponents. She would not be able to kill Leena fairly, so she chopped off the poor girls arms. Wondering if she could make use of this, Lilinette fused Leena's body with electricity and metal, and fused her arms with her electronic fists, turning her into Lilinetts first Electric Golem. 
    Hp: The equivalent to 1 B-rank attack.
    Ability: Lightnings Fists of Fury: Each physical hit she lands causes a C-ranked shock of electricity through the target. Once per post, she can even shoot out blasts of C-rank lightning towards her target. These blases are 3 feet in diameter, fly at speed of up to 35 mps, and fly up to 20 meters away. 
    Strengths:
    - Very high intelligence.
    - Each hit causes C-rank damage and electrocutes the opponent. (It is electricity, making it very powerful, and dangerous, in water)
    - Once per thread, she can shoot out a blast of C-rank lightning towards a single target.
    Weaknesses:
    - Despite being an electric Golem, due to the weight the cuffs put on her, she isn't very fast. She can only move at around 10 mps max.
    - Leena will electrocute anything she touches without intent, meaning that she can't exactly give an ally a pat on the back.
    - If her gauntlets get directly wet, it can cause them to electrocute Leena herself.
    - Her blasts are attracted towards metal (like most electricity)
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 6 posts (unless destroyed sooner, or if destroyed completely he can never come back)

    Edits are in colors.

    I only got up to the first 2 golems. That should be enough for right now.


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    Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Thu Nov 27, 2014 6:12 pm

    bump :) ready for further instruction :)


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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 27, 2014 6:17 pm

    Rebump,

    I posted the edits on the first two golems. You need to edit those. Then I will continue.


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    Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Thu Nov 27, 2014 6:20 pm

    edits made. (it is supposed to be Frost Bod)


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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 27, 2014 7:08 pm

    Hiro - No range with the fire. Enchanting his weapons to do that much damage is already a lot.

    Khione - range of 3m with her hair. Even though it can be cut, being ice and crystals... and being able to retract, er... whip it back, allows a lot of fancy cool things.

    Rokku - "Shadows Reload- Rokku's guns never run out of bullets, for they are constantly being refilled by shadows. These bullets travel up to 25 meters per second, and up to 60 meters away. " Change it to 30m. It has unlimited ammo. This is a spell.. or at least it should be. Or you can turn it into a weapon for other reasons...

    Leena : "Ability: Lightnings Fists of Fury: Each physical hit she lands causes a C-ranked shock of electricity through the target. Once per post, she can even shoot out blasts of C-rank lightning towards her target. These blases are 3 feet in diameter, fly at speed of up to 35 mps, and fly up to 20 meters away. " This is two abilities. Lower the damage to D-rank (As you can punch many times in a post... striking as fast as... whatever. You could say that with each punch is emits a bolt of electricity. Like you did with Hiro... do something about this.

    After this... it should be good.



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    Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Thu Nov 27, 2014 7:17 pm

    edited sir! you are the bestest.


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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 27, 2014 7:27 pm

    - Golem Sight: Lilinette can link with her golems, seeing and hearing anything they can see or hear no matter how far away they are, and still retain the ability to see through her own eyes as well.

    Remove this, and you'll be good to go.

    Reason: This is the Rinnegan.

    NOPENOPENOPE.


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    Post by Lilinette Q. Mido Thu Nov 27, 2014 8:36 pm

    edited.


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    Post by Kaseki Thu Nov 27, 2014 8:42 pm

    Approved


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